Many governments think that economic progress is their most important goal. Some people, however, think that other types of progress are equally important for a country.
Economic development is one of the key factors to be considered for the nation’s progress. It is often a debatable issue by some people that government bodies treat economic status as the crucial target in their development journey, while others state that several aspects need to be considered for the progress of the nation. In my opinion, I firmly believe the latter view as economic growth is not the sole goal rather other reasons need to be considered in my perception.
To commence with, industrialization had a great impact on many nation’s financial levels. As a result of this, the productivity in the nation’s is soared dramatically which thereby reduced the rate of unemployment among the nations. Additionally, with this progress in the nation’s economy, taxes are declined on basic facilities such as food and clothes, ultimately raising the public standard of living. To illustrate, in one of the most developed nations like China, America, the lifestyle among the people is changed after the measures taken by their governments by providing better employment opportunities to its citizens.
In contrast, although the government intervention accompanied many advantages in the nation’s economy, some of the significant fields are given trivial or little importance. In other words, health and education systems are constantly being overlooked by the governments. Additionally, a country’s economy will be indirectly dependent on their citizen’s mental and physical conditions. Similarly, the literacy rate can certainly contribute to the success of a nation across the globe. For instance, in most of the developing nations like India and Africa, due to the dearth of proper medication and educational Infrastructure, these nation’s are in the developing phase over the decades with slight development.
To recapitulate, when it comes to the growth of a nation, people always divide their opinions, some might choose economic factors to play a major role while the other trivial factors such as health and education constitutes the nation’s growth.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, look, similarly, so, while, for instance, in contrast, such as, as a result, in my opinion, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 15.0 24.0651302605 62% => OK
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.51401869159 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.1701856655 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.570093457944 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 561.6 506.74238477 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 56.7035267054 49.4020404114 115% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.153846154 106.682146367 128% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.6923076923 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.84615384615 7.06120827912 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.196391331245 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0700179150588 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0563082448996 0.0667982634062 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121051987496 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0522304793163 0.056905535591 92% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 38.66 50.2224549098 77% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.97 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 99.0 78.4519038076 126% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.