Technology has made children less creative than they were in the past
Technology has revolutionized the way we live .If we talk about the usage of tech in our life , definitely advanced us from our past. I am not agree with the prompt saying that children are less creative than they were in the past with below three reasons.
Firstly , i believe that kids now days are so much brilliant and smart because having tech in their daily lives.For instance ,the students of 5th and 6th grade students are programming on computers and making new programs and we have a lot of examples that proves that the age of 9 or 10 are making their own games or apps for mobile: this is only possible for by providing online classes for it , by 'TECHNOLOGY' around them.For giving a example when i was 16 i do;t know what is C++ or java , these are computer languages but i have a niece of same age and she is actually working internship in software company and working on one of most racing computer language.Therefore ,children are presenting themselves with more creativeness and smartness around the world.
Secondly ,if we talk about he time before pandemic ,students were going to school daily and having book studies , but due to pandemic now days we are having online classes , a student of 4-5 years now know how to operate Teams app,tablet and computer. Now how technology helping them in this to promote creative mind, now take a example for drawing class , they are doing by hand on traditional way but they are also using paint app which giving them more insights about more colors , type of color , it is preparing their mind to experiment tree not with just dark green color but different 10 colors to fill a tree,hence diversity in knowledge promotes more creative minds to work.
At the end ,some of us argues that this technology comes with a drawback that is health of kids , using excessively can lead to severe damage of body,but everything works fine when we do within proper portion.So there is now harm using tablets , mobiles or using internet if we let our children to use in right way and precise time.If we don't let our children to know new world which is changing in every second in sense of technology then at one time we fail them.It is important to get the child ready for it .
In conclusion , tech has made children more creative from past , tech comes with more advanced games , studies and multiple factors which excites the kids nowdays more.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, then, therefore, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 15.1003584229 132% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 9.8082437276 10% => OK
Conjunction : 20.0 13.8261648746 145% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 47.0 43.0788530466 109% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 52.1666666667 115% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.0752688172 37% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1960.0 1977.66487455 99% => OK
No of words: 421.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.65558194774 4.8611393121 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54985637399 2.67179642975 95% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.553444180523 0.524837075471 105% => OK
syllable_count: 612.9 618.680645161 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.59856630824 63% => OK
Article: 2.0 3.08781362007 65% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.86738351254 107% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 20.6003584229 34% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 60.0 20.1344086022 298% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 222.1707378 48.9658058833 454% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 280.0 100.406767564 279% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 60.1428571429 20.6045352989 292% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 16.2857142857 5.45110844103 299% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 39.0 5.5376344086 704% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 11.8709677419 42% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.215521044498 0.236089414692 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.122138685057 0.076458572812 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.116601143725 0.0737576698707 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.136969576574 0.150856017488 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.102180524674 0.0645574589148 158% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 30.6 11.7677419355 260% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 19.04 58.1214874552 33% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.10430107527 183% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 10.1575268817 251% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 10.64 10.9000537634 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.01818996416 120% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 86.8835125448 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 10.002688172 180% => OK
gunning_fog: 26.0 10.0537634409 259% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 26.0 10.247311828 254% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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