Do you agree or disagree with the following statement?
It is better to have broad knowledge of many academic subjects than to specialize in one specific subject.
Some people believe that students should enhance their knowledge only specific to one subject because doing so allows them easily and quickly master in one skill set. However, in my opinion, I do not agree with that stance and think that having skills into multiple subjects for students is essential in the 21st century for the following three reasons.
First of all, knowing deep aspects and concepts for multiple academic subjects are integral part of students's life because it develops better chances of getting job opportunities after completing academic's studies. For example, when a students in college only studies to one subject like English, they will get very limited jobs like into writing ,teaching or may be into blog writing which are also not sure to have great success in number of opening positions. In contrast, if students who have studied science, biology and Arts, they have greater chance of getting into any sector that can be into medical , engineering or into music and art. This will lead to further success down the line and ensure that student are able to live secured life.
Secondly, better expertise into multiple subjects assured the better growth options in job aspects whereas if students limited to one subject boundaries to its knowledge into one field. For instance, engineer who have hand on to multiple coding language like C++, python and Java, which have better option for enhance its skill into new technologies which are parent from previous known languages. In other hand, student who are specific to one language limits its growth to specific to one line of job .
In conclusion, because knowing deep concepts and facts engender secured future and also produces better growth respective to job. It is my contention that they emphasized over one subject.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 233, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[1]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'a student' or simply 'students'?
Suggestion: a student; students
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Line 2, column 346, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
... get very limited jobs like into writing ,teaching or may be into blog writing whi...
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Line 2, column 608, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...into any sector that can be into medical , engineering or into music and art. This...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ts growth to specific to one line of job . In conclusion, because knowing deep co...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 15.1003584229 60% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 9.8082437276 51% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 13.8261648746 80% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.0286738351 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 43.0788530466 46% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 52.1666666667 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.0752688172 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1977.66487455 76% => OK
No of words: 295.0 407.700716846 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.10508474576 4.8611393121 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.40527088449 2.67179642975 90% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 212.727598566 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579661016949 0.524837075471 110% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 618.680645161 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 0.0 3.08781362007 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.94265232975 81% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.1344086022 129% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 54.3478237873 48.9658058833 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 136.909090909 100.406767564 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.8181818182 20.6045352989 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.0909090909 5.45110844103 240% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.85842293907 26% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.254172921889 0.236089414692 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108006148864 0.076458572812 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0692476398396 0.0737576698707 94% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168000379283 0.150856017488 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0653666960222 0.0645574589148 101% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 11.7677419355 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 58.1214874552 78% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 10.1575268817 132% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.65 10.9000537634 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.01818996416 106% => OK
difficult_words: 66.0 86.8835125448 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 10.002688172 135% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.0537634409 123% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.247311828 127% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
Rates: 76.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 23.0 Out of 30
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