Overweight People are predicted to have a higher risk of various chronic diseases, such as heart disease, diabetes, and kidney disease. Although it is not a secret to everyone, more and more people are still overweight. This essay will show the causes and measures to overcome this epidemic situation.
The cause of obesity is extremely complex, so the conclusion about the cause of obesity is still controversial. However, scientists have summarized three main causes of obesity. First, people on a high-fat diet. Diet is one of the most important factors and a factor that directly affects the weight of the patient. Currently, young people tend to use more unhealthy fast foods. Because it is such an unscientific way of eating increases the chance of being overweight. Second, the habit of lazy exercise. When too much energy is loaded into the body that cannot be consumed and burned, the excess energy accumulated for a long time will be converted into excess fat in the body. Finally, people with poor sleep are more likely to be overweight. Studies have also shown that people who sleep less are more likely to be overweight or obese.
To prevent obesity, overweight is increasing, first of all, patients need to regularly participate in physical activities, to quickly burn excess fat and quickly consume energy. Moreover, patients need to have a healthy diet and activities. Regularly drink a lot of water and eat a lot of fruit, eat and sleep on time, create a habit of sleeping early, not staying up late. Finally, it is important to monitor your weight regularly. It helps you control your weight better.
In short, obesity is becoming more and more commons and dangerous because it can cause many dangerous diseases to health. Therefore, it is very important to understand the causes of overweight, thereby making reasonable adjustments to lifestyle and daily habits.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 379, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Because” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... tend to use more unhealthy fast foods. Because it is such an unscientific way of eatin...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, finally, first, however, if, moreover, second, so, still, therefore, in short, such as, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 311.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.06752411576 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19942759058 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72446141563 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.565916398714 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 16.0721442886 124% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.7725687503 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.55 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.3 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.244696166253 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0702411965467 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0724241591369 0.0667982634062 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.149210567063 0.151304729494 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0872830836026 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.83 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.59 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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