Modern technology has a great impact on our environment. Some say that people should adopt a simple lifestyle to solve this problem, while others argue that the technology itself should provide a solution. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.

will be far more less compared to the current situation.
will be far less compared to the current situation.

is capable to find the solution for the every problem
is capable to find solutions for every problem

with the help of the modern technology.
with the help of modern technology.

flaws:
'All of above', 'Therefore', and 'Consequently' are identical for conclusions:

All of above, the people would like to change their materialistic attitudes under the influence of simple living and high thinking. Therefore, the excessive consumerism could be curtailed at the larger extent. Consequently, the amount of rubbish causing environmental issues will be far more less compared to the current situation.

Attribute Value Ideal
Score: 7.5 out of 9
Category: Very Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 3 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 25 15
No. of Words: 414 350
No. of Characters: 2145 1500
No. of Different Words: 231 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.511 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.181 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.844 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 166 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 123 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 95 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 66 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 16.56 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 5.866 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.48 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.246 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.447 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.027 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5

Sir tell me in detail what's problem with all of above
Therefore and consequently ???
I dint understand

And the use of modern technology

The use of the modern technology

You mean the is used once in front of use so I don't need to use it twice like the modern technology ????

And tell me when I should not use article the in a sentence

Sir tell me in detail what's problem with all of above
Therefore and consequently ???
I dint understand

And the use of modern technology

The use of the modern technology

You mean the is used once in front of use so I don't need to use it twice like the modern technology ????

No, the reason is that 'modern technology' has not been previously mentioned, like 'medical technology'. It is generally refereed to all technology. So 'the' is not necessary here.

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'All of above', 'Therefore', and 'Consequently' are all for conclusions:

All of above, the people would like to change their materialistic attitudes under the influence of simple living and high thinking. //this is one conclusion.

Therefore, the excessive consumerism could be curtailed at the larger extent. //this is the second conclusion.

Consequently, the amount of rubbish causing environmental issues will be far more less compared to the current situation. //this is the third conclusion.

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Look at the pattern we suggested:

paragraph 1: introduction -- explain in your own words about the issue and give a thesis statement at the end. Give a reasonable not a dogmatic statement.

paragraph 2: reason 1 + why reason 1 + example + a small conclusion for this paragraph. (don't make three conclusions for one paragraph)

paragraph 3: reason 2 + why reason 2 + example + a small conclusion for this paragraph. (don't make three conclusions for one paragraph)

paragraph 4: qualification -- moderate your position. This may involve a sentence beginning with "but" or "however"...

paragraph 5: conclusion -- reinforce the thesis.

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A simple example (Eating at home or restaurant) for paragraph 2:
Para 2: First,reason 1 (1 sentence: Eating at home can save money) + why reason 1(some arguments. 2-3 sentences: I can prepare cheaper food from food market; I don't need to drive or take a bus to reach the restaurant; I don't need to pay tips...) + examples for reason 1 (around 1 sentence: for example, a sandwich can cost me $10 at restaurant, but it only cost me $5 at home.) + small conclusions (like advantages of reason 1 or comparisons if not reason 1, 1-2 sentences: with the money I saved, I can buy a good book to read or use the money for a trip...).

Dear Sir
I have a question about the following sentence :
"Initially, the omnipotent technology is capable to find the solution for the every problem. "
Is there any structures for "capable" like this?
(Capable to do sth ????)
I think it is wrong. Could you clarify it?

Yes, it is wrong. The e-rater couldn't figure it out. It should be:

is able to find the solution

or

is capable of finding the solution