Advertising industry has a huge influence on the society. Do you think positive effects of advertising outweigh negative effects
Advertisements are supposed to be form of mass communication in this modern world. These have become backbone of corporate world. Presently, the influence of adverts is gaining ground radically over societies. Here, this essay will establish positives of advert outweigh its negatives.
There are multifarious points to shore up positives. First and foremost, adverts play a phenomenal role to uplift the standard of shopping. For example, these broaden the horizon of one's knowledge about price, features, qualities of latest and exclusive products for selection of best products. Thus, adverti...
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Hi essayE! Most your comments
Hi essayE!
Most your comments are so general and don't go into details.
For instance, in the sentence "There are multifarious points to shore up positives" if here "shore up" is used correctly or we should replace with another word like "justify".
The main thing which i would like to mention here is that it would be great if you recommend vocabulary usage in sentences rather than general evaluation of essay.
Thanks,
Huan
Thank you for the
Thank you for the suggestions.
If the words are not used properly, we will let users know, but if words like "shore up" are used correctly, we will not ask users change them to something else. for example,
"shore up" means support, while "justify" means 'show or prove to be right or reasonable'.
They are different in meanings.
If you read more essays, you will find out users use some words frequently in their essays . It is easily figure out which words are used properly or used wrongly.
Sentence: Hence, showing adverts is a splendid way to deliver message publically.
Error: publically Suggestion: No alternate word
Sentence: Furthermore, nowadays, adverisement related to bad things such as smoking products, liquor so on psych up people to consume harmful things.
Error: adverisement Suggestion: advertisement
Sentence: To recapitulate, undenaibly, the contribution of adverts to upsurge social and economic values is exceptional. some steps should be taken against bad strategies of broadcasters to stop them from raising problems in all sectors of life.
Error: undenaibly Suggestion: undeniably
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