Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Overall, the widespread use of the internet has a mostly positive effect on life in today’s world
I strongly agree that the broadly use of internet become vital in nowadays life. The internet can become the essential tool if we use effectively.
First of all, tourism industry of a developing country is depending on the factors how to promote among with the others. This can be done successfully by the usage of internet. Traditions and cultural of a nation can share via social platform. For example, the Philippines, is a country comprised with thousands of islands, which is famous during this time because of the traveler bloggers. They visit that country and then, they illustrated the natural beauties and local craft markets and life styles of that country to around the world. As a result, the income of the Philippines is increased apparently.
Secondly, the internet also mainly take part in health care system. From the end of 2019 up to today, people don’t have been allowed to go the crowded places due to Covid-19. Hence, the online clinic system is appeared and the health care guidelines were distributed through the Facebook and other applications. Thus, people can get the knowledge comfortably. In last month, the alcohol spray entered into my eyes accidently, at that time, I was infected by Covid-19 and isolated. But I could be cured by using the suggestion from the online clinic system.
We cannot omit the need of internet in education and business sectors. The competitive launching of various shopping applications and food delivery system occur in every country these days and people can buy from that with time saving. They can transfer money from mobile banking and wallets and purchase most of the items form online. Children can learn variety of subjects and improve their ability with the usage of online learning website and classes. In addition, they can make friends from all over the world and exchange their language. According to the experience of my nephew, he was a one who introvert and he really changed after attending the online social class, thus become one positive thing.
As such things that I mentioned above, the internet is inevitable in people daily life styles because it carries out the most of the important roles in today
| Post date | Users | Rates | Link to Content |
|---|---|---|---|
| 2021-10-31 | Pyae Pyae Aung | 75 | view |
| 2021-09-04 | pmm | 3 | view |
| 2021-08-31 | Vinnes | 85 | view |
| 2020-07-07 | AMARDEEP KOUR GEDHU | 66 | view |
| 2020-06-03 | mmz | 73 | view |
- Governments should provide universal healthcare 70
- Because the modern life is very complex it is essential for young people to have the ability to plan and organize 76
- The expression Never never give up means to keep trying and never stop working for your goals Do you agree or disagree with the statement Use specific reasons and examples to support your idea 70
- Young people enjoy life more than older people do 60
- In the 1950s Torreya Taxifolia a type of evergreen tree once very common in the state of Florida started to die out No one is sure exactly what caused the decline but chances are good that if nothing is done Torreya will soon become extinct Experts a 76
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 64, Rule ID: IN_NOWADAYS[1]
Message: nowadays is used without 'in'. Use simply: 'nowadays'.
Suggestion: nowadays
...he broadly use of internet become vital in nowadays life. The internet can become the essen...
^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 56, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ourism industry of a developing country is depending on the factors how to promote among wit...
^^^^^^^^^^^^
Line 4, column 600, Rule ID: WHO_NOUN[1]
Message: A noun should not follow "who". Try changing to a verb or maybe to 'who is a introvert'.
Suggestion: who is a introvert
...e experience of my nephew, he was a one who introvert and he really changed after attending t...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, hence, if, really, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, in addition, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 10.4613686534 115% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 5.04856512141 218% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 17.0 7.30242825607 233% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 8.0 12.0772626932 66% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 22.412803532 116% => OK
Preposition: 55.0 30.3222958057 181% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 5.01324503311 80% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1825.0 1373.03311258 133% => OK
No of words: 365.0 270.72406181 135% => OK
Chars per words: 5.0 5.08290768461 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37092360658 4.04702891845 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58855543753 2.5805825403 100% => OK
Unique words: 217.0 145.348785872 149% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.594520547945 0.540411800872 110% => OK
syllable_count: 575.1 419.366225166 137% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 3.25607064018 276% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 8.0 8.23620309051 97% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.25165562914 160% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 1.51434878587 66% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 2.5761589404 194% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 13.0662251656 161% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 21.2450331126 80% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.5291874319 49.2860985944 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.9047619048 110.228320801 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.380952381 21.698381199 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.38095238095 7.06452816374 90% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.09492273731 122% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 4.19205298013 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 4.33554083885 346% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 4.45695364238 22% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.27373068433 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157402907183 0.272083759551 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0438214349174 0.0996497079465 44% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0465626727998 0.0662205650399 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.101128288406 0.162205337803 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516168403571 0.0443174109184 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.8 13.3589403974 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 53.8541721854 101% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 5.55761589404 56% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.0289183223 90% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.42 12.2367328918 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.98 8.42419426049 107% => OK
difficult_words: 104.0 63.6247240618 163% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 10.7273730684 65% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.498013245 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.2008830022 80% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Write the essay in 20 minutes.
Rates: 75.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 22.5 Out of 30
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.