Writing task 1 You are writing your first letter to a pen pal Describe your previous studies and work experience your current activities hobbies and interests Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him her You should write at least 150 words You shou

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Writing task 1

You are writing your first letter to a pen pal. Describe your previous studies and work experience, your current activities, hobbies and interests.

Tell your pen pal that you will be visiting him/her.
• You should write at least 150 words.
• You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

Hi Gaurav

I hope this letter find you in health and harmony, as this is my first communication with you, I have a lot to share and connect. As we are new pen pals, I hope you would also be looking a meaningful friendship here, as I am quite excited about this.

First of all, I would like to share that I have done my Masters in Computer Applications from Panjab University, Chandigarh. As I am a native of Panchkula, most of my schooling and higher education is completed here only.
As I am a Software Engineer, I am very fond of programming, however, as being an extrovert and outgoing person, I am passionate about lot of other activities as well. Meeting new people, travelling, trekking, photography are my few hobbies, along with these my love for food is eternal. Besides trying new cuisines, I have a sweet tooth for variety of baked products.
In addition to these hobbies, I appreciate good music and watching movies, particularly thriller,action,mystery.

I know we have started this bond by means of letters, but I would really love to meet you in person. I will be travelling to your city next month for some official work, so I hope, we can meet. I am all open for a face to face conversation over a cup of coffee .I will be waiting for your revert on this.

Yours Faithfully
Niharika

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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rst communication with you, I have a lot to share and connect. As we are new pen...
^^
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lot to share and connect. As we are new pen pals, I hope you would also be looki...
^^
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... would like to share that I have done my Masters in Computer Applications from Pa...
^^
Line 6, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y fond of programming, however, as being an extrovert and outgoing person, I am ...
^^
Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing, however, as being an extrovert and outgoing person, I am passionate about l...
^^
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , action
...d watching movies, particularly thriller,action,mystery. I know we have started this...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... official work, so I hope, we can meet. I am all open for a face to face conversa...
^
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o face conversation over a cup of coffee .I will be waiting for your revert on thi...
^^
Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...face conversation over a cup of coffee .I will be waiting for your revert on this...
^
Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...face conversation over a cup of coffee .I will be waiting for your revert on this...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, look, really, so, well, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61276595745 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06574998929 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612765957447 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4099120355 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156905041182 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601838001872 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582227619259 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687166335039 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736198708467 0.0580467560999 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.

Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...rst communication with you, I have a lot to share and connect. As we are new pen...
^^
Line 3, column 145, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...lot to share and connect. As we are new pen pals, I hope you would also be looki...
^^
Line 5, column 56, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... would like to share that I have done my Masters in Computer Applications from Pa...
^^
Line 6, column 78, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y fond of programming, however, as being an extrovert and outgoing person, I am ...
^^
Line 6, column 96, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ing, however, as being an extrovert and outgoing person, I am passionate about l...
^^
Line 7, column 97, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , action
...d watching movies, particularly thriller,action,mystery. I know we have started this...
^^^^^^^
Line 9, column 195, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... official work, so I hope, we can meet. I am all open for a face to face conversa...
^
Line 9, column 261, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o face conversation over a cup of coffee .I will be waiting for your revert on thi...
^^
Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...face conversation over a cup of coffee .I will be waiting for your revert on this...
^
Line 9, column 263, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...face conversation over a cup of coffee .I will be waiting for your revert on this...
^

Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, first, however, look, really, so, well, in addition, first of all

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.48453608247 120% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 32.9175257732 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1084.0 937.175257732 116% => OK
No of words: 235.0 206.0 114% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61276595745 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.91531732006 3.78020617076 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06574998929 2.54303337028 121% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 127.690721649 113% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.612765957447 0.622605031667 98% => OK
syllable_count: 343.8 290.88556701 118% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 14.0 9.13402061856 153% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 1.83505154639 327% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 33.4099120355 44.8134815571 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.3333333333 76.5299724578 118% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5833333333 16.8248392259 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.08333333333 4.34317383033 163% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156905041182 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601838001872 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0582227619259 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0687166335039 0.12726935374 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0736198708467 0.0580467560999 127% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 8.37731958763 121% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.34 7.59969072165 110% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 41.2886597938 136% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.