The government should control the amount of violence in films and on television in order to decrease the level of violent crimes in the society. Do you agree or disagree?
Violence has been a part of television and movies for as long as television and films have existed, and the issue of whether the level of media violence should be restricted by the government has been the subject of considerable debate in last decades. In my opinion, I agree the government should take appropriate measure to deal with media violence.
On the one hand, there are some positive sides of TV and movie violence. Firstly, through watching violence on television programs and films, people can learn about the world. For example, some movies contain some violence, but they reflect thin...
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