THE QUALITY THAT MAKE SOMEONE ADMIRABLE
The individuals have different standards to consider their own role models. In my view, role models are humorous and passionate people.
First, sense of humour is valuable for it is not what people are trained to have, but it comes within. Most of the times, funny people are responsible to cheer the atmosphere up and keep the conversation going in a gathering. In some ways, the positive energy they carry capably light up many embarrassing moments, keep their friends closer, or even make the whole day better. therefore, not only me, I believe that many people who love making people laugh and love to bring up the positive energy to the others will take humorous people as their role models.
Beside a great personality as humor, there is passion which is supposed to make people the better versions. In my opinion, a genius will become a normal one if they live without passion. It is hardly possible to get along with things we are not interested in regardless of our talents or potentials about it. People almost need various motivation to do bigger things, to not lose their hope and to break the limits; and there is almost nothing more obvious than passion which is able to make people keep on trying untill achieving their goals. Besides, passion is uncertainly a key to success, but at least it makes our life significant. As a result, passionate people are usually the ones who inspire and encourage people to struggle in their darkest time.
To sum up, sense of humor and passion have different impacts. While humorous people bring happiness to others, passionate people are well-treated by themselves. Unsurprisingly, many people admire and want to become these two kinds of persons.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 378, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Therefore
...ser, or even make the whole day better. therefore, not only me, I believe that many peopl...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, if, so, therefore, well, while, at least, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 32.9175257732 70% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 26.3917525773 148% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1422.0 937.175257732 152% => OK
No of words: 289.0 206.0 140% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.92041522491 4.54256449028 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12310562562 3.78020617076 109% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.601744807 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 127.690721649 133% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.588235294118 0.622605031667 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 452.7 290.88556701 156% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 9.13402061856 22% => OK
Article: 3.0 0.824742268041 364% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.463917525773 862% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 1.44329896907 416% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.4867990618 44.8134815571 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 94.8 76.5299724578 124% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2666666667 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.46666666667 4.34317383033 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 2.54639175258 39% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 7.41237113402 175% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0752288929536 0.216113520407 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0272266111286 0.0766984524023 35% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0351061057166 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0408851458087 0.12726935374 32% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0251007044021 0.0580467560999 43% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.4 8.37731958763 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 70.7449484536 74% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 7.45979381443 143% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.26 8.71597938144 129% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 7.59969072165 108% => OK
difficult_words: 67.0 41.2886597938 162% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 8.62886597938 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.