The qualities that make someone admirable
It is thought that heroes are normally in mythology or fairy tales. To my mind, nowadays, heroes are essential parts of daily life. Wherever we go, we hear about the heroes. So, have you ever wondered, what qualities make them so admirable? Let’s consider what are these qualities?
I hold the opinion that heroes have three common qualities. Sacrifice is a quality that stands unique from all the other virtues which makes heroes noble in their deeds.They dedicate all their time, their health or their own money to volunteering, they can be doctors, nurses, policemen, on the front lines of the fight against Covid-19 pandemic, or housewives, students,… who are silient sacrifice for their children, their friend… all of them are heroes of our world. Diligence is the second quality of admirable people. They work hard daily without any complaints about the tiredness they feel on their job, these heroes don’t watse their time on any ussless things. Instead, they will do more useful things like planting more trees, picking up trash, leading the old woman across the street,… these small things play important role to make our life more beautiful. Last but not least, the significant quality of a hero is courage. People who are heroes always overcome their fear even the fear of death to face with the challenge head on. Understand that their attendence in any situations decide a critical role to save someone’s live, they don’t care about what will happen or what can be their life threatening because they are courage people, who are heroes.
A hero is not born, he is self-made. We all do possess some of the virtues, but a hero can be said to be the most out-standing or perfect virtues. If you want to be a hero, you need to have these qualities which were mentioned above. These virtues can be learned and improved, anyone can be a hero if he or she is sacrifice, diligence and courage.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, second, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 23.0 7.48453608247 307% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 5.05154639175 198% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 3.03092783505 297% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 43.0 32.9175257732 131% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 26.3917525773 133% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1593.0 937.175257732 170% => OK
No of words: 328.0 206.0 159% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.85670731707 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 3.78020617076 113% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52372553697 2.54303337028 99% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 127.690721649 146% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.57012195122 0.622605031667 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 489.6 290.88556701 168% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 15.0 9.13402061856 164% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 12.6804123711 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 16.3608247423 116% => OK
Sentence length SD: 92.3714481269 44.8134815571 206% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 93.7058823529 76.5299724578 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.2941176471 16.8248392259 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.11764705882 4.34317383033 26% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 7.41237113402 202% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.156163720185 0.216113520407 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609658774347 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0918070153977 0.0603063233224 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114629434805 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0674541983069 0.0580467560999 116% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 8.37731958763 133% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 70.7449484536 86% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 7.45979381443 127% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.09 7.59969072165 106% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 41.2886597938 177% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 8.54432989691 112% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 8.15463917526 123% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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