GRE sample issue pool essay topic 45
Educators should find out what students want included in the curriculum and then offer it to them.
Write a response in which you discuss the extent to which you agree or disagree with the recommendation and explain your reasoning for the position you take. In developing and supporting your position, describe specific circumstances in which adopting the recommendation would or would not be advantageous and explain how these examples shape your position.
The speaker contends that the curriculum should be offered to students based on what they want to study. I concede that finding out what student want in their curriculum helps in increasing their productivity and interest towards the subject matter. In most respect, however, educators with more experience can guide students to better curriculum.
Admittedly, flexible curriculum motivates children to be more attentive towards their study. When students are given opportunity to choose what they want to study, it will automatically increase their productivity towards those topic. They tend to send more time in studying and getting better at it. For instance, In developed countries, where there are universities who tend to make education flexible, have more successful students than developing countries which provides fixed curriculum for a study. Say, a student has affinity for science and wants to become a physicist, but does not understand botany. In that scenario, if educators provide a curriculum of science with botany, then that student has second thought on choosing that curriculum. Not only the uninteresting subject in a curriculum demotivates students, it also makes them unproductive on those subjects they are seriously into. Thus speaker’s claim has some merit in giving opportunity for students to choose their curriculum.
However, the speakers ignores that the educators are more experienced and they can guide students based on their interest. The educators, who has seen many previous student’s life cycle, can guide new students into a better option. For instance, if a student wants to study all the fundamental courses in the curriculum, then he will be far behind other students who choose tough curriculum. Not only this, educators can challenge the student potential and direct them towards more fruitful courses. They can also evaluate if any course the students are opting for requires prerequisites. Thus it is even better for educators to be involved in curriculum choosing process.
Furthermore, the speaker also ignores the tendency of students choosing wrong courses for their long term goal. When educators design a curriculum they design a series of courses which will be beneficial for the student in their field of interest. For example, if a student wants to become a proficient software developer, then students might have affinity for programming subjects but might not know data structures and algorithm is equally important. Since data structure and algorithm is not directly a programming course but provides fundamental knowledge about complex programming, students can easily miss data structure and algorithm. Hence, letting educators design a curriculum makes student to not miss out on the fundamentals and eases the process of learning.
In sum, the statement correctly states that students involvement in choosing curriculum is essential because it allows them to choose their field of interest. However, statement does not fully credit the educators who can make the curriculum choosing process ease and guide students towards more organized and better learning.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 681, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[3]
Message: The verb 'does' requires base form of the verb: 'state'
Suggestion: state
... they grew. The author does not clearly states whether those children who are being in...
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Line 4, column 138, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Whether” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
... many other factors should be analyzed. Whether those children who are being interviewe...
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Line 4, column 509, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'authors'' or 'author's'?
Suggestion: authors'; author's
... of the factor is changed slightly, the authors conclusion is based on fallacious assum...
^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, lastly, may, moreover, so, still, well, such as, talking about
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 35.0 19.6327345309 178% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 12.9520958084 108% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 11.1786427146 63% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 13.6137724551 95% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 28.8173652695 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 69.0 55.5748502994 124% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 16.3942115768 98% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2814.0 2260.96107784 124% => OK
No of words: 514.0 441.139720559 117% => OK
Chars per words: 5.47470817121 5.12650576532 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.76146701107 4.56307096286 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08361769482 2.78398813304 111% => OK
Unique words: 224.0 204.123752495 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.43579766537 0.468620217663 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 862.2 705.55239521 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 4.96107784431 161% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.70958083832 148% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.22255489022 166% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 19.7664670659 116% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.5243956497 57.8364921388 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.347826087 119.503703932 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.347826087 23.324526521 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.91304347826 5.70786347227 86% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.20758483034 73% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 6.88822355289 73% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 12.0 4.67664670659 257% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.133382604471 0.218282227539 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0515641917529 0.0743258471296 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320121856939 0.0701772020484 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0808639494391 0.128457276422 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0392224755673 0.0628817314937 62% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 14.3799401198 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.3550499002 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.74 12.5979740519 117% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.32208582834 98% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 98.500998004 114% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.5 12.3882235529 101% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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