It is commonly believed that a formal degree is a certificate for achievements and the significance of qualified people is more in compassion to others who have vast wisdom. I partly support the statement as this essay examines the facts closely and discusses traits that experience teaches.
Irrefutable, from early civilization to the modern era alma mater play a significant role in making students for the competence level. Education makes
people subject matter experts, for instance, doctors, engineers, and so on. These people are often consulted for getting a piece of expert advice
related to their fields, possess incredible respect among common folks, and earn a handsome six-figure salary. Yet, I opine that academic attainment is not only a barometer of being valuable in society. Evidently, there are countless successful entrepreneurs and outliers who were once a school
dropouts. Hence, it would be unfair to tag educated people as the most valuable for society.
There are numerous traits that could be learned through experience. Firstly, experience makes people more articulate in the light of vivid hues of life.
They ingrain a sense of expression and communication skills that make a deep impact on the mind of their followers. secondly, loads of knowledge regarding a particular process make people risk-averse. Candidly speaking, the world has applauded those who have incorporated detailed analysis and practical aspects before taking the decision. Furthermore, based on the routine experience they become an instrument of cost-effectiveness and productivity.
In conclusion, though an academic certificate teaches an advanced level of the subjects, educated people as well as experienced ones, both are equally important in society.
- You are taking a holiday in a place recommended by your local travel agent and you are having a wonderful time You promise to write to him and let him know what you think of his suggestion Write a letter to your travel agent as promised and let him know w 70
- Levels of youth crime are increasing rapidly in most cities around the world What are the reasons for this and suggest some solutions 56
- Nowadays many children are using cellphones and mobile phones Many say it is good Some say it is bad What is your opinion 56
- You live in a room in college which you share with another student However there are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college In the letter describe the situation 73
- IN SOME COUNTRIES TEENAGERS ARE ENCOURAGED TO DO PART TIME JOBS BY SOME PEOPLE OTHERS DISAGREE DISCUSS BOTH VIEWS AND GIVE YOUR OPINION 56
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 116, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Secondly
... impact on the mind of their followers. secondly, loads of knowledge regarding a particu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, hence, if, regarding, second, secondly, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 8.3376753507 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1506.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 268.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.61940298507 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04607285448 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.08974150404 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660447761194 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 482.4 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 35.0787051579 49.4020404114 71% => OK
Chars per sentence: 100.4 106.682146367 94% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8666666667 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 8.0 4.38176352705 183% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334624147108 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0958828617762 0.084324248473 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0737315701384 0.0667982634062 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.14050375496 0.151304729494 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0763049250827 0.056905535591 134% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.3 50.2224549098 74% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.02 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.14 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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