Analysts tell us that many people today feel stressed and think they have insufficient control over their lives.
What problems do such feelings cause for people? What remedies could you suggest?
It is common for a contemporary person to experience stress. Research point out that having a massive level of stress can make people believe that their lives are out-of-control. This leads to many difficulties; however, plausible steps are available to tackle the problem.
The major problem might be in terms of work efficiency. When a person is suffering from psychological problems, ranging from depressio to anxiety, and insecurity, he is more likely to be demotivated and lower self-esteem. This will result in, low conspicuous working performance and harm productivity in workplace. Obviously, such people are more likely to get dismissed from their jobs. Unemployment will further exacerbate their problem. Another problem emphasis the concern with personal relationship. Frustrated people are prone to lose their patience even for trival matters. Often breaking into fights with partners will cause breakages in relationships. Divorce and separation are inevitable in bitter relationship.
Turning to the viable remedies, the key is to eliminate the root cause through relaxation techniques. People can opt for methods, such as yoga and meditation, to regulate their emotions and try to control their outbursts. Playing sports can be another way. Only by channelize the excessive energy and releasing builtup tension can people be able to find peace. It will not only help with mental health but also physical fitness will be imporved. Furthermore, people should attempt to go on vacation with family members. Visiting new places and discovering new cultures will change people’s view of the world, which can make them more tolerant of differences.
To conclude, there are two possible problems, namely, getting fired and wounding relationships. Nonetheless, straightforward measures, such as adapting relaxing methodologies and holidaying, are effective to help people in alleviate problematic circumstances.
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- Some people think that being creative in their free time is beneficial Discuss merits and demerits and give your opinion 89
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, however, if, nonetheless, so, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1643.0 1615.20841683 102% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.72473867596 5.12529762239 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.15353147624 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.651567944251 0.561755894193 116% => OK
syllable_count: 503.1 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.2613670165 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.2380952381 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.6666666667 20.7667163134 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.90476190476 7.06120827912 41% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.19769993898 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0548871430369 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05320264106 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.119983924754 0.151304729494 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0479009210479 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 41.36 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.3 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.89 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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