Nowadays many children are being brought up in single parent families.What are the causes of this?What effects can be seen as a result?
Most youngsters are ,today,growing up in one parent families because of main couple of reasons.I think consequences of these causes may impact on not only society but also the world .
First of all,many young couples get married in their early age,and they think they are not ready for nurturing their family and children after the marriage.Then,they may avoid getting responsibility for their children.As a result,many children are brought up by single parent.This situation can also affect to children's bahaviour and future lives.These children begin to see this world negatively.They may be enemy to the society which they are raising.They think the whole world may be like that.
Secondly,many families cannot come to agreement in their family problems.Consequently,they decide to divorce to solve these disagreements which have emerged in their families.There is a great negative impact on their children's life.For example,after seeing this situation these children's life has changed completely.The youngsters may suffer from lack of kindness which parents give it to their children.As a result,they think providing they get married to someone,their families will also get divorced.Thus,they prefer not to have family during their whole lives.This situation can also effect to decreasing of population in the world.
To conclude,these two aforementioned causes lie in front of the government waiting for being found a certain solution.From my point of view,government should pay more attention these types of families by listening to their problems and trying to solve them.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i think, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67510548523 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63902660789 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.975788225 49.4020404114 368% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 336.25 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.25 20.7667163134 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.5 7.06120827912 432% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226771596314 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133925647659 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541075534126 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133925647659 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541075534126 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.9 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
Most youngsters are ,today,growing up in one parent families ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , growing
Most youngsters are ,today,growing up in one parent families because of ma...
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Suggestion: I
...ilies because of main couple of reasons.I think consequences of these causes may ...
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Suggestion: .
...t on not only society but also the world . First of all,many young couples get ma...
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Suggestion: , many
...ciety but also the world . First of all,many young couples get married in their earl...
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...g couples get married in their early age,and they think they are not ready for nurtu...
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... family and children after the marriage.Then,they may avoid getting responsibility f...
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...ily and children after the marriage.Then,they may avoid getting responsibility for th...
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Suggestion: As
...tting responsibility for their children.As a result,many children are brought up b...
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...nsibility for their children.As a result,many children are brought up by single paren...
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...hildren are brought up by single parent.This situation can also affect to childrens ...
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...to childrens bahaviour and future lives.These children begin to see this world negati...
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...dren begin to see this world negatively.They may be enemy to the society which they ...
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Suggestion: They
...y to the society which they are raising.They think the whole world may be like that....
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... whole world may be like that. Secondly,many families cannot come to agreement in th...
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Suggestion: Consequently
...e to agreement in their family problems.Consequently,they decide to divorce to solve these d...
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...nt in their family problems.Consequently,they decide to divorce to solve these disagr...
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Suggestion: There
...ts which have emerged in their families.There is a great negative impact on their chi...
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Suggestion: For
...negative impact on their childrens life.For example,after seeing this situation the...
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Suggestion: , after
...pact on their childrens life.For example,after seeing this situation these childrens l...
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...e childrens life has changed completely.The youngsters may suffer from lack of kind...
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Suggestion: As
...which parents give it to their children.As a result,they think providing they get ...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , they
...ts give it to their children.As a result,they think providing they get married to som...
^^^^^
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , their
...nk providing they get married to someone,their families will also get divorced.Thus,th...
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Suggestion: Thus
...e,their families will also get divorced.Thus,they prefer not to have family during t...
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Suggestion: , they
...eir families will also get divorced.Thus,they prefer not to have family during their ...
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Suggestion: This
...to have family during their whole lives.This situation can also effect to decreasing...
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...of population in the world. To conclude,these two aforementioned causes lie in front ...
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Suggestion: From
...ting for being found a certain solution.From my point of view,government should pay ...
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Suggestion: , government
...a certain solution.From my point of view,government should pay more attention these types o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, second, secondly, so, then, thus, for example, i think, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1345.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 237.0 315.596192385 75% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.67510548523 5.12529762239 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.92362132708 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.63902660789 2.80592935109 130% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 176.041082164 80% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590717299578 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 403.2 506.74238477 80% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 5.43587174349 221% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 59.0 20.2975951904 291% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 181.975788225 49.4020404114 368% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 336.25 106.682146367 315% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 59.25 20.7667163134 285% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 30.5 7.06120827912 432% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 30.0 5.01903807615 598% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 8.67935871743 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226771596314 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.133925647659 0.084324248473 159% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0541075534126 0.0667982634062 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133925647659 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0541075534126 0.056905535591 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.9 13.0946893788 267% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 3.13 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.5 11.3001002004 243% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 16.55 12.4159519038 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.36 8.58950901804 121% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 25.6 10.1190380762 253% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 29.0 10.7795591182 269% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.