1. Nowadays, an increasing number of people are concerned about which architectural styles are appropriate and required for humans.
2. Whether to construct a large number of buildings in a modern or traditional style is a controversial issue.
3. In my view, building houses in traditional way is unsuitable for people’s current living conditions.
4. First, it is obvious that traditional construction types, such as level four homes, tile roof buildings, and so on, are ancient and modest.
5. This means that most of these types of houses are usually quite narrow and take up a lot of space to build, so it will not be suitable for the current situation of increasing population over time.
6. So, if we pursue such path, we will face several issues such as a lack of housing and insufficient land space for people's settlement due to the world's restricted living land.
7. Moreover, because people in the twenty-first century have a strong need for new and handy items, and this desire is expected to grow, building ancient structures in the traditional style are no longer fashionable.
8. Instead, developing it into skyscrapers, luxury villas that are completely equipped, and above all, capable of overcoming the majority of the issues in the conventional of building dwellings.
9. For example, building modern-style buildings helps to enhance land use rates when population growth is rising, and it is also in line with the policy of urbanization.
10. This isn't to argue that conventional dwellings should be phased out entirely.
11. Of course, the traditional house has its beauty, and it is also a symbol of their nation's culture, with the preservation of historic house building being an indispensable part of the transmission about the nation's history for posterity most explicitly and unambiguously possible.
12. But, it is unnecessary to devote a large amount of land to the construction of traditional houses, which causes many disadvantages, to maintain the national culture.
13. In conclusion, the constant development of the global economy is usually accompanied by people's high demands on services and living circumstances, therefore it is unsurprising that many houses in the modernization are popular and appear many days today.
14. Meanwhile, we should also pay attention to the harmonious balance between modernization and national tradition.
15. By doing that, we can make sure that national traditions will not be lost, the way of life will not become obsolete, and that it will be able to readily integrate with the changing and developing world.
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Essay reference notes: This topic is refereed from another essay topic, developed by user: Sunuwar_42
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 24, Rule ID: LARGE_NUMBER_OF[1]
Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ed for humans. 2. Whether to construct a large number of buildings in a modern or traditional st...
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Line 10, column 9, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: isn't
...h the policy of urbanization. 10. This isnt to argue that conventional dwellings sh...
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Line 11, column 210, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'nations'' or 'nation's'?
Suggestion: nations'; nation's
...able part of the transmission about the nations history for posterity most explicitly a...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in conclusion, of course, such as, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 13.1623246493 167% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 17.0 10.4138276553 163% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 54.0 41.998997996 129% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2195.0 1615.20841683 136% => OK
No of words: 417.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.26378896882 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.5189133491 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09414044037 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 239.0 176.041082164 136% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573141486811 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 667.8 506.74238477 132% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 6.0 0.809619238477 741% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.4483142715 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.333333333 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.8 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 15.0 4.38176352705 342% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.281600808474 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.101599587937 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0794032718554 0.0667982634062 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100895148101 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797016654385 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.2 13.0946893788 131% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.22 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 112.0 78.4519038076 143% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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