the plans below show the layout of a university's sports centre now and how it will look after a refurbishment
summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where possible
The two plans illustrate the layout of a university sports centre at present as well as the layout after its reburishment.
Overall, at present the university sports centre is indoor space which is located between two outdoor courts. The future sports centre incorporates a bigger indoor space with installation of a pool, rooms, and shops for multiple purpose.
Current sports centre layout has a 25m pool in the center, surrounded by changing room, gym and seating from left to right. Two outdoor courts are located to the east and west of the sports centre.
In the future plan, both outdoor courts will be re-established as a single large indoor area, while retaining the old layout, new spaces will be added for variety of purposes. Based on the new layout two dance studio adjacent to eachother is planned to be built in the east corner of the centre, and in the west, adjacent to the old changing room, a large leisure pool will be installed. Couple of additional changing rooms shall be created to the south, one near the new pool and other to the dance floor, sports shop and cafe is also included while are planned to be adjacent to the new changing rooms.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 211, Rule ID: CD_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun 'studio' seems to be countable, so consider using: 'studios'.
Suggestion: studios
...oses. Based on the new layout two dance studio adjacent to eachother is planned to be ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 1.00243902439 399% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 972.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 204.0 196.424390244 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76470588235 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 3.73543355544 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47373748863 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.509803921569 0.547539520022 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 283.5 283.868780488 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 3.36585365854 59% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 22.4926829268 111% => OK
Sentence length SD: 47.5815090135 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.5 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 22.9334400587 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.125 5.23603664747 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.162554060913 0.215688989381 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0871442178074 0.103423049105 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586081777001 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12595882657 0.15604864568 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0619303330843 0.0819641961636 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.2329268293 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 63.02 61.2550243902 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 10.3012195122 104% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.62 11.4140731707 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.59 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.9970731707 109% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 11.0658536585 72% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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