Some people think students should be educated about human sexuality and reproduction in secondary. Others think that taking about sexuality and reproduction will make young people more likely to have sex. What is your opinion and why ?
sexuality is the tender issue whenever talking about so quite less parents want to concern this to their child. so, children have less knowledge about it. In my opinion, children should be taught about human sexuality and reproduction when they are just a kid and secondary school is the best occasion for them to approach.
knowing early reproductive and sexuality knowledge helps children have gender awareness and put them into operation to protect their own. kids are gonna grow up, that means they have many changes in their body. it is inevitable that the uncertainty about state changes in their body. children should get ready with a deep understanding about this. The parent should provide their child with necessary information such as where babies come from or the difference between a girl and a boy. when a child is taught the importance of protecting their own from physical impact on the body and the value of the human body they will know how to react with some quandary situation.
“Taking about sexuality and reproduction will make young people more likely to have sex”, I don’t agree with this statement. everyone often has a wrong view about this issue. they put sexuality and reproduction into quandary and are quite shy to mention, causing unexpected consequences for their children. such as, lack of sexuality and reproduction can cause unplanned pregnancy in girls and disrespect for women in boys. Adolescent curiosity always makes the kids tend to want to learn and experience so they should have guild study from the early none of this should ever have happened.
The education of children from early on sexuality and reproduction is necessary. it not only helps them cover themself and respect everyone's body, it is also helpful for society. educational institutions should increase teaching in this aspect to raise awareness of humans.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, second, so, such as, talking about, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1597.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 307.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20195439739 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.18585898806 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64870323235 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.557003257329 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 484.2 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4230432502 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.9411764706 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0588235294 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.47058823529 7.06120827912 49% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 15.0 5.01903807615 299% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.311423439339 0.244688304435 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106658781884 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.103997572437 0.0667982634062 156% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195867604467 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856401847979 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.58 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.62 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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