the graph below show the amount of money spent on books in Germany France Italy and Austria between 1995 to 2005

Essay topics:

the graph below show the amount of money spent on books in Germany, France, Italy and Austria between 1995 to 2005.

The given line graph illustrates how much money spent on books in four different coutries from 1995 to 2005.
Overall, what stands out from the chart is that the data of Germany was always the highest and much higher than others. In addition, Austria started at the lowest.
Between 1995 and 1997, the amount of money used for books increased slightly from 30 to 40 millions in Austria, roundly 55 to 60 millions in France and 80 to 90 millions in Gremany while that of Italy remained stable at 50 millions. By 2003, the level of Austria went up significantly to about 60 millions, higher than that of Italy 2 millions and there was a slight drop in the data of Germany from 90 to 85 millions, accounting for 5 millions.
In the last year, the amount of money spent on books in Austria, Italy and France continued increasing to 71, 62 and 73 millions respectively. Additionally, the data of Germany reached the highest at 95 million after a slight drop.

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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, while, in addition

Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments

Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 3.0 7.0 43% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 3.0 5.60731707317 54% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 33.7804878049 112% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.97073170732 25% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.

Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 788.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 171.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.6081871345 4.92477711251 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61617157096 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.56620554431 2.65546596893 97% => OK
Unique words: 95.0 106.607317073 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.555555555556 0.547539520022 101% => OK
syllable_count: 216.9 283.868780488 76% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.45097560976 90% => OK

A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK

Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 22.4926829268 107% => OK
Sentence length SD: 62.1574695464 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.571428571 112.824112599 100% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.4285714286 22.9334400587 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.14285714286 5.23603664747 60% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 1.69756097561 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.13902439024 263% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?

Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.325078656563 0.215688989381 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.145205411903 0.103423049105 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.106735767172 0.0843802449381 126% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.194180076584 0.15604864568 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0796677964614 0.0819641961636 97% => OK

Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.2329268293 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.5 61.2550243902 118% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.75 11.4140731707 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.6 8.06136585366 94% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.9970731707 105% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?

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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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