It is true that nowadays numerous kids have their self cell phones. This essay will explicate the advantages and its disadvantages in the following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are many merits of this trend. First and foremost this is very assist in the toddler study. To explain it, kids can innumerable mathematics hurdles done by mobile phones. Moreover, this is the boon for youngster. children learn the various types of poems from the phones. With this kid mind can make a sharp and intelligent. To epitome, a headline was published in "THE MOSCOW TIMES" newspaper revealed in 2019 that 70% children were intelligent and they were on number first in the class. Hence, children can handle the all kinds of obstacles.
On the other hand, there are also very demerits of the cell phones. To explicate it, there are numerous health affect on the kids. their eyesight are weak with the high resolution lights of phones. In addition, many kids waste a lot of hours on the games and with this their back problem starting soon. To example, a survey was conducted by the (WHO) "WORLD HEALTH ORGANIZATION" found that 80% cases have come juvenile eyesight damaged. Therefore,they can surrounded by the fatal disease.
In conclude, although android set is the best for the children for their study yet there are very wild affect on the children health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, hence, moreover, so, therefore, in addition, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1153.0 1615.20841683 71% => OK
No of words: 229.0 315.596192385 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03493449782 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7277725217 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 176.041082164 76% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.580786026201 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 344.7 506.74238477 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.2975951904 64% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.3219932993 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.8235294118 106.682146367 64% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.4705882353 20.7667163134 65% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.11764705882 7.06120827912 72% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.119798955176 0.244688304435 49% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0359474130279 0.084324248473 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0320244811241 0.0667982634062 48% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0841259285374 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0267394336744 0.056905535591 47% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.0 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 66.74 50.2224549098 133% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.3 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.1190380762 71% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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