Recent research suggests that the majority of criminals who are sent to prison commit crimes after they are released. Why is this the case? What can be done to solve this problem?
There has been many discussions about whether prison is the proper punishment for criminals or not. Recent data depicts that, most of the people who get out of prison, continue to illegal activity. This essay will discuss the reason for this issue and possible ways of tackling this problem.
It has been said that prison is a very dangerous place for anyone. In most countries, prisoners are not treated very nicely. Criminals, usually people who are there for the first time, are faced with very harsh circumstances that they have not been preparing for. This kind of environment will only toughen whoever staying there. Moreover, even a person who serving for a misdemeanor, will change into a different and vicious person after coming upon people who have done major crimes. In other words, ironically, prison which is a place for offenders to learn their lesson, is usually the place that will make worse people out of them. For example, suppose a felon is in prison for stealing something of low value or a driving ticket he could not pay for. After spending a lot of time with men who have done worse, he can get encouraged to live life recklessly and breaking laws.
However, there are answers to this problem. Although prison should be sentence for the crime, that does not mean it has to be a bad place. If a criminal is thought to be only the someone who has lost his way, and his wrongdoings seen as mistakes, he will be treated much better. In this way, prisons can become a safe space for them to find their way back into a better life. Provided that, jails will nourish a person and improve their characters. Teaching offenders that what they did was a mistake and society will accept them once again when they have learned their lesson will motivate them to become better. To illustrate, various educational courses can be held in jail to teach them useful skills. These skills can be used to find proper jobs outside once they get out. Furthermore, convicts can lower their sentence by reading books. each book for instance, can take a week out of their jail time.
In conclusion, it is true that jails alters personality, and usually, that change is into worse. Their cruel conditions act as a catalyst in aggravating character. However, there are solutions which can be helpful. If prisons times are planned with attention to improvement, many walk out a better person. This can be achieved, although there is a long way to go.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, however, if, moreover, so, as to, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of, in other words, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 27.0 13.1623246493 205% => Less to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 18.0 7.85571142285 229% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 18.0 7.30460921844 246% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 41.0 24.0651302605 170% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2029.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 427.0 315.596192385 135% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75175644028 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.54576487731 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45015465779 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 228.0 176.041082164 130% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533957845433 0.561755894193 95% => OK
syllable_count: 622.8 506.74238477 123% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 16.0721442886 162% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.845804194 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.0384615385 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.4230769231 20.7667163134 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.03846153846 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 16.0 3.9879759519 401% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.250239726444 0.244688304435 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0731272904706 0.084324248473 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0534000083424 0.0667982634062 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.163786000436 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0385895429728 0.056905535591 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.97 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.5 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 83.0 78.4519038076 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.