In recent times, an influx of individuals has left their hometown and moved far away, especially for work commitments or for further education, especially in developed cities. Many people claim that it is beneficial for their growth, as a financial individual; however, others argue that it has more negative effects on individuals when leaving their hometown. In my opinion, leaving your hometown has more benefits as compared to the drawbacks.
On the one hand, it is evident that moving to a well-known university or getting a job in a renowned enterprise is quite essential for growing individual cognitive and social skills. Moreover, from a financial perspective, it is extremely propitious to leave your hometown for better work opportunities. In other words, there are many distinguished educational centers and multinational corporations situated outside one's city, which may be far away from one's hometown, and from a career perspective, it is a crucial step to leave one's hometown. For example, there are many MNC's such as Google, Microsoft, Tesla, and many more. In order to get a job in these organizations, it is vital to leave one hometown for higher education to open the gateway for getting employment within these companies. There are many dwellers leaving their home city for getting admissions to top universities around the world in order to become financially strong candidates.
On the other hand, when someone leaves their own town for several reasons they may experience a feeling of isolation every now and then, along with it, one may also feel homesickness. Furthermore, they can even experience culture shock in the community. The feeling of isolation and culture shock, for instance, is most common for immigrants who have moved to foreign countries for higher education. However, one can overcome these feelings by making new friends, involving themselves in extra-curricular activities, or by building a good network among seniors as well as with their professors.
In conclusion, it is apparent from the above assertion that moving away from hometown, especially for work or studies, has more benefits than drawbacks owing to the increased educational and work opportunities, into a renowned university and organization respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 456, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...e ones city, which may be far away from ones hometown, and from a career perspective...
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Line 3, column 532, Rule ID: ONES[1]
Message: Did you mean 'one's'?
Suggestion: one's
...spective, it is a crucial step to leave ones hometown. For example, there are many M...
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Line 5, column 118, Rule ID: EVERY_NOW_AND_THEN[1]
Message: Use simply 'now and then'.
Suggestion: now and then
...y may experience a feeling of isolation every now and then, along with it, one may also feel homes...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, may, moreover, so, then, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, as well as, in my opinion, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1922.0 1615.20841683 119% => OK
No of words: 356.0 315.596192385 113% => OK
Chars per words: 5.39887640449 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.10941734132 2.80592935109 111% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.550561797753 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 10.0 4.76152304609 210% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.6576635353 49.4020404114 113% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.285714286 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.4285714286 20.7667163134 122% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.1428571429 7.06120827912 172% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195056858527 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0742711949049 0.084324248473 88% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0325893064971 0.0667982634062 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.125678565943 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0199903231989 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 37.64 50.2224549098 75% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.2 11.3001002004 126% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.4 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 78.4519038076 130% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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