In the modern days, teenagers have ascess to the social networks much more than they used to in the past and as a consequence, this leads to a significant increase of the crime rate among teenagers in many countries. In my opinion, I assume the government must join hands to prevent this rate growing up faster. These will state some common reasons and essensial solutions to this problem.
To begin with, I think this issue is caused by the increasing gap between the rich and the poor. The rich will become more wealthy while the poor is more faulty. So huge is the gap that gradually poor people feel stressed, depressed and dejected, which makes them think of commiting crime. Futhermore, as life has recently been much easier for young people and they depend on their parents’s finance most of the time. They just use money watsefully and are controlled by the seduction of bad people to try illegal activities such as consumption of drugs, which have also contributed a lot in enhancing the crime level around the globe. Lastly, I personally believe that teenagers has been influenced a lot by some contaminated content or illegal websites, violent videos and so on. This affects the thoughts and manners of teenagers as well.
Therefore, both governments and parents should keep an eye on young people to discrease the ratio of crime. The policians have to not only create more satisfactory jobs for the poor but they also provide the impartial opportunity for everybody to apply for each company. There has been little success in the war against drugs, so taking stringent actions against drug traffickers can be another solution. For instance, parents should care for their children more and pay attention to what they pay for so as to control the behavior of teenagers toward illegal activities.
In the nutshell, this is not the problem of one person and all citizens should take the responsibility immediately for the development of young peole, who will be the talented building up the country in near future
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- Fashion has become more and more important when people choose clothes Why Do you think it is a positive or negative development 78
- The table below highlights data on the number of travelers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012 100
- The table below highlights data on the number of travelers using three major German airports between 2007 and 2012 100
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 503, Rule ID: SO_AS_TO[1]
Message: Use simply 'to'
Suggestion: to
... and pay attention to what they pay for so as to control the behavior of teenagers towar...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, lastly, so, therefore, well, while, as to, for instance, i think, such as, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1686.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.91545189504 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66113850685 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 198.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.577259475219 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3568777175 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 112.4 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.8666666667 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.86666666667 7.06120827912 111% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.25401957607 0.244688304435 104% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0771742708502 0.084324248473 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.06770048423 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.152440105436 0.151304729494 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0969833350973 0.056905535591 170% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.55 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.46 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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