Some people think that certain prisoners should be made to do unpaid community work instead of being put behind bars. To what extent do you agree or disagree.
it is debatable how we should treat inmates during their imprisonment time. A number of people are inclined to believe that certain offenders should be allowed in volunteer activities rather than spending their fulltime behind the bars. Personally, I completely agree with this view because of the positive outcomes for the criminals themselves and the whole society. I will try to explain why in this essay with the appropriate arguments.
Some people can prove to be a great asset not only to the country but also for themselves if made to labour for the community, such as clearing roads, constructing city infrastructure and doing charity works. For example, it is affirmed that lawbreakers who are assigned to community works are less likely to commit crimes again. Thus, criminals with a low level of illegal activities Must be assigned to community services.
Also, by Doing community works during the period of imprisonment will severely benefit inmates. They will have opportunities to learn many useful skills. For instance, by working in a restaurant, convicts will be able to gain necessary experience to continue working after their release.
In conclusion, community works are necessary for criminals, not only that it will decrease future crime rates, society will be improved as well.
- Some people think that children must take care of and clean their school buildings 92
- Is money the most important aspect of a job 56
- Some people think that a regular language test helps children to improve their knowledge 83
- teenager are rude ill mannered and idle 60
- Some people think that excess lessons help children to improve their knowledge 83
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, thus, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 9.8082437276 102% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 13.8261648746 22% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 11.0286738351 36% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 43.0788530466 39% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 52.1666666667 54% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 4.0 8.0752688172 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1098.0 1977.66487455 56% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 208.0 407.700716846 51% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.27884615385 4.8611393121 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.48103885553 85% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84873518597 2.67179642975 107% => OK
Unique words: 133.0 212.727598566 63% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.639423076923 0.524837075471 122% => OK
syllable_count: 351.0 618.680645161 57% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 1.0 3.08781362007 32% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.51792114695 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.94265232975 61% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 20.6003584229 53% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 20.1344086022 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 42.4114049841 48.9658058833 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8181818182 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.9090909091 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.27272727273 5.45110844103 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.53405017921 88% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.5376344086 72% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 11.8709677419 51% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.88709677419 20% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.213073874977 0.236089414692 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0724636893013 0.076458572812 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0555233542515 0.0737576698707 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124243557189 0.150856017488 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0368553926502 0.0645574589148 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 11.7677419355 110% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 58.1214874552 77% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 10.1575268817 113% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.34 10.9000537634 122% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.93 8.01818996416 111% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 86.8835125448 67% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 10.002688172 115% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.0537634409 92% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Better to have 5 paragraphs with 3 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: conclusion.
So how to find out those reasons. There is a formula:
reasons == advantages or
reasons == disadvantages
for example, we can always apply 'save time', 'save/make money', 'find a job', 'make friends', 'get more information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
or we can apply 'waste time', 'waste money', 'no job', 'make bad friends', 'get bad information' as reasons to all essay/speaking topics.
More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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