You went to another city for a training course and stayed at a friend’s house for a week. They have been great hosts. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter:
• thank them for having you at their house for a week
• express your gratitude for their hospitality
• say how much you miss them
Dear Jack,
I’m James and I’m writing this letter to appreciate your kindness and your awesome hospitality during the week that I was your guest.
In fact, If I hadn’t had you, I would have been forced to stay in a hotel or rent a room, which definitely would cost me and an arm and a leg. By putting me in, I was able to attend the training course about the latest techniques in sales and paying the tuition. So, thanks a million.
And the way you treated me was so special too. You kindly made me feel like I’m home, and I had the time of my life during that week. Participating in the seminars in the morning, and then hanging out with you in the city was a dream come true. With all those fantastic clubs and great drinks, especially when we went to that swimming pool with its amazing measures, I got rejuvenated.
With that being said, I really miss you, more than you can imagine. So, please contact me on my Whatsapp number which is: 09123069096. What’s more, next month, January 5th, my girlfriend is throwing my birthday party, and you are invited as well. Feel free to bring your partner, and we won’t take no in response.
Thank you again for being a great host, I can’t wait to see you again.
Best regards,
James Smith
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 298, Rule ID: NOW[2]
Message: Did you mean 'now' (=at this moment) instead of 'no' (negation)?
Suggestion: now
...o bring your partner, and we won’t take no in response. Thank you again for being...
^^
Line 7, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...’t wait to see you again. Best regards, James Smith
^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, really, so, then, well, in fact
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 42.0 32.9175257732 128% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1026.0 937.175257732 109% => OK
No of words: 231.0 206.0 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.44155844156 4.54256449028 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89854898053 3.78020617076 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.32433268735 2.54303337028 91% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.658008658009 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 291.6 290.88556701 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 5.0 0.463917525773 1078% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.6954843807 44.8134815571 91% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.2857142857 76.5299724578 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5 16.8248392259 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.5 4.34317383033 58% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227598536522 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0638070310526 0.0766984524023 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0628983168562 0.0603063233224 104% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133035598471 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0665161407123 0.0580467560999 115% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.7 8.37731958763 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 80.62 70.7449484536 114% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.18 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.75 7.59969072165 89% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.