Nowadays, in comparison to the amount of elderly people, several countries’ population contains great number of young adults. The situation of having a young population has plenty of advantages and disadvantages. In my opininon, however, there are more disadvantages than advantages.
To begin with downsides, if population of a country is quite young, length of lives could be relatively short. Moreover, rate of births could not be controlled by any kind of institution and it is necessity to pursue this by governments. Even though, possibilty of child pregnancy is really high in that kind of a country. Also, more young people mean to a large number of people who want to work and earn money and because of this, number of jobs will not be enough in one day. Thus, unemployment rate could be increase and it can be cause to low level life standards for citizens.
To continue with upsides, sometimes elderly people could be prevent the developing of a country because they cannot be a part of new investments or understand the modern technology while the younger people rapidly adapt to the current inovations. Furthermore, they can create this innovations or improve the obsolete ones. Although fresh ideas are always good for follow the world, this ideas are raised and grew by older people. So, I think, advantages are not enough to outweigh the disadvantages.
In conclude, countries which have young age population are more than countries which have old population in these days. In my opinion, having old age population bring more advantages rather than disadvantages.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, however, if, moreover, really, so, thus, while, i think, kind of, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1334.0 1615.20841683 83% => OK
No of words: 259.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.15057915058 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.01166760082 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93861711533 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 150.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579150579151 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.2124393799 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 95.2857142857 106.682146367 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.07142857143 7.06120827912 114% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.231415803143 0.244688304435 95% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0712451202895 0.084324248473 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0808668080963 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.134586065608 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0434859477832 0.056905535591 76% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.59 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.88 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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