The following is taken from a memo from the advertising director of the Super Screen Movie Production Company.
"According to a recent report from our marketing department, during the past year, fewer people attended Super Screen-produced movies than in any other year. And yet the percentage of positive reviews by movie reviewers about specific Super Screen movies actually increased during the past year. Clearly, the contents of these reviews are not reaching enough of our prospective viewers. Thus, the problem lies not with the quality of our movies but with the public's lack of awareness that movies of good quality are available. Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising."
Write a response in which you discuss what questions would need to be answered in order to decide whether the recommendation and the argument on which it is based are reasonable. Be sure to explain how the answers to these questions would help to evaluate the recommendation.
The author argues here that increasing the advertising budget will draw more movie- goers to attend Super Screen produced movies. Stated in this way the argument displays several instances of poor reasoning and makes a host incorrect assumptions, which degrades its cogency, thus rendering the argument rather unsubstantiated. Simply increasing the amount of advertising will not assure a greater footfall to any movie. A host of other factors including the date of movie release, the show times allocated, the number of theaters where the movie will be screened and several more, will have to be considered.
The most pertinent question one should ask while dissecting probable causes of poor attendance at any movie is the release date of that particular movie, and whether any other big- budget movies released during the same period. It may so happen that Super Screen movies always prefer to release their movies at specific holiday periods so as to maximize movie attendance. However a majority of high budget movies may also prefer to release their movies during the same periods with a similar objective. This may be a probable reason behind the poor attendance at movies produced by Super Screen.
Secondly, consider the statement where the author states how the movie reviewers have given positive reviews to specific Super Screen movies. The emphasis should be on the word specific. We do not know in reality, the actual number of movies which have indeed garnered positive reviews. The question immediately arises that what percentage of Super Screen produced movies have indeed generated a positive review among critics. It may be seven out of ten or even two out of ten. Since this is direct measure of the quality of movies produced by Super Screen, it is imperative that we know the answer to this question.
Finally, it may be so that the quality of movies produced by Super Screen have nothing to do with the attendance. One of the most gripping issues one must consider in this context is that related to piracy. Nowadays, majority of people choose to watch pirated movies in their homes, free of cost. Thus even if movies produced by Super Screen are of good quality, it does not mean that people will throng to the movie theaters to catch. To determine whether piracy is the culprit behind the meager sales of Super Screen movies, one can collect data related to movie attendance for the past five or ten years, and then inspect the trend to see whether it is a declining one or not. If the attendance to all movies have indeed declined, then piracy can be considered as one of the primary reasons behind it.
In conclusion it can be inferred that the lack of proper supporting evidence behind the author’s assumptions, the argument remains unpersuasive as it stands. To bolster this argument, the author must provide answers to the questions raised above, incorporating the results of some the surveys suggested. Only then can one draw a definitive conclusion as to whether lack of advertising is indeed the most relevant cause behind poor attendance at Super Screen movies, and whether increase in advertising budget is necessary.
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argument 1 -- not really. You mean if the company released movies in other days, they are going to get better result?
argument 2 -- not OK. read this:'the percentage of positive reviews .... increased' compared to previous years.
suggested:
it might be the case that the percentage of those people who liked the films or are simply more keen on sharing their opinions with others through reviews was just higher during this specific year.
argument 3 -- piracy could be the reason, but there are more reasons like: a price increase last year, a demographic change, an economic crisis, DVD rental...
The argument 1 and argument 3 can be put in one argument.
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Need to argue against the conclusion: 'Super Screen should therefore allocate a greater share of its budget next year to reaching the public through advertising'
suggested:
even if publicity is the reason for its low turnout, the director did not explain what effects advertisements would have on increasing public awareness. How much has been spent on previous advertisements? What is the current level of advertising? What results have present advertising generated? These are questions that the movie management would like to have answered before they concede to spending more money on advertisement. If previous advertisement have not been yielding results, then the management may refuse to spend more money on advertising.
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