Whilst informational systems are now being utilized to aid the old, some people are worrying about the possible negative outcomes.
To what extent do you agree with this statement?
By the advent of systems saving and sharing useful due to helping older generation, some people opine that it is not beneficial due to negative repercussions it might bring. Even though, using technology within some aspects of life is not recommending as a small mistake might prompt irreparable damages, acquiring it in elders Life is just reaping the benefits from my perspective informational system is a fruitful gadget by which accessing to much data would be possible in an eye blinks, So I briefly agree to getting worried about this information source.
First, what is helping speed increase in having access to this sort of information is inquiry system. Clearly, a few decades ago the old were not able to have their eye-popping information with them any time they need, so in case of emergency it was demanded to reach precise details easily. However, using these systems make getting any requiring information possible that doing so is just quick and money saving. Namely, I heard about a sick old man who used to carry every medical information with preventing death as he was likely to faint any time not being able to tell people what had happened. To sum up, having these information systems would help having essential data quickly and everywhere.
Second, old people who are suffering from mental disease cannot recall accurate information properly. Actually, because of the mental issue they are more likely to get lost or not being capable remembering
different facts. So, getting into trouble is very common among there group of people. On the hand submitting crucial informational details about identity or medical information or any other additional concept world prevent getting Lost or going to hospital under unknown circumstances, for instance, an old woman who suffers from an illness making her unable to talk or home any conversation with people around, had an accident which she got injured, subsequently she was being taken to hospital and the only thing surviving her was getting access to her medical history by information system. Generally, in hospital or medical centers reaching right information will be the key to success specially if that person not being eligible talking about his information due to disease he is going through.
All in all, in contemporary era in which humans’ activity is on the basis of technology, using informational system is beneficial as it is quick and accurate specially for older groups of people. I briefly agree to not using Just because of negative results which seem to be quite rare.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, briefly, first, however, if, second, so, for instance, sort of, talking about, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 26.0 13.1623246493 198% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 59.0 41.998997996 140% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2158.0 1615.20841683 134% => OK
No of words: 421.0 315.596192385 133% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12589073634 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52971130743 4.20363070211 108% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76146424964 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 232.0 176.041082164 132% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55106888361 0.561755894193 98% => OK
syllable_count: 688.5 506.74238477 136% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 118.55309669 49.4020404114 240% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 154.142857143 106.682146367 144% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.0714285714 20.7667163134 145% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.0 7.06120827912 99% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.271228963685 0.244688304435 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0939688884966 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0477741281148 0.0667982634062 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.144696757326 0.151304729494 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0515251975578 0.056905535591 91% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.8 13.0946893788 136% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.73 8.58950901804 102% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.5 9.78957915832 199% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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