Society is based on rules and laws. If individuals were free to do whatever they want to do, it could not function. To what extent do you agree or disagree with the above statement?
Many people suggest that rules and laws are introduced to maintain the stable order of the society, which act as deterrent for residents from absent minded actions. While this proposal exhibits conducive to some extent, I opine that those laws exert negative pressure to its residents.
To begin with, some politicians may argue that it is essential to reinforce the rules or laws to control people’s behaviours. In addition, by imposing tough regulations can the officials set boundaries for their residents who, in turn, behave with others more friendly. In fact, if there is no justice system for a society, it is likely that the police forces cannot use their right to urge offenders to comply the regulations, leading to the deteriorated upheavals. However, this proposal seems to be temporary due to the widespread impacts on the rest of society, which includes a vast majority of law-abiding citizens.
Despite the aforementioned benefit, I would content that laws and rules systems brough to mordern society cause more harm than good. To be more specific, it is deemed that the authorities explicitly favour certain groups in the society. Therefore, it is disavantaged for those who belong to the minority. For example, there are more and more strikes in the US to protect the right of black people who are oppressed by the prejudice of the laws, resulting in the numerous deaths of them annually. Indeed, I believe that it is better if the officials and their residents should negotiate to reach an final consensus that can balance the benefit of each counterpart.
In conclusion, while potential orders to maintain the society is tangible, I opine that its drawbacks should be taken into account.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 596, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...eir residents should negotiate to reach an final consensus that can balance the be...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, if, may, so, therefore, while, for example, in addition, in conclusion, in fact, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 14.0 7.30460921844 192% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1433.0 1615.20841683 89% => OK
No of words: 281.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09964412811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09427095027 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78568820279 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.590747330961 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 454.5 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.8109976237 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.416666667 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4166666667 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.58333333333 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0725948791418 0.244688304435 30% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0273067016637 0.084324248473 32% => Sentence topic similarity is low.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0294278360062 0.0667982634062 44% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.044810645366 0.151304729494 30% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0173277716542 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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It is not exactly right on the topic in the view of e-grader. Maybe there is a wrong essay topic.
Rates: 11.2359550562 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 1.0 Out of 9
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