You have a full-time job and you are also doing a part-time evening course.
You know that you cannot continue the course. Write a letter to your teachers. In your letter
Describe the situation
Explain why you cannot continue at this time
Say what you would like to take
Dear Smith,
I am writing to inform you that I have to leave the evening course. As I do not count with enough time as I used to I have to face a sensitive situation that recently came out.
Last week, there was a blackout which lasted three long hours. My aunt stumbled and broke her right arm. Moreover, her sight is not the same since then. Also, her condition is not the best at this moment and I am in charge of her care from now on until she gets recovered. Besides, it will be impossible to attend to the lectures as I used to do it until further notice.
On the other hand, I would like to ask you some help and advice. As soon as my aunt receives and complete all the treatment, I would like to apply for a new course but only on Weekends. I have decided this option as it is the one which will suits me by then. I would be extremely grateful if you could give me hand by now.
I am looking forward hearing from you,
Yours sincerely
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Dear Smith, I am writing to inform you that I have t...
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Line 6, column 293, Rule ID: YOUR_SHOULD[1]
Message: Did you mean 'you'?
Suggestion: you
... then. I would be extremely grateful if your could stand me hand by now. I am lo...
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Line 8, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...if your could stand me hand by now. I am looking forward hearing from you, ...
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Line 8, column 39, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... I am looking forward hearing from you, Yours sincerely
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, so, then, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 771.0 937.175257732 82% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.12299465241 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.18755144803 2.54303337028 86% => OK
Unique words: 119.0 127.690721649 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.636363636364 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 243.0 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 9.13402061856 120% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 25.9950582911 44.8134815571 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 64.25 76.5299724578 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.5833333333 16.8248392259 93% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.58333333333 4.34317383033 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221699312904 0.216113520407 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.070303528826 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0707261184511 0.0603063233224 117% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139504059547 0.12726935374 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0731172461454 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.8 8.37731958763 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 81.63 70.7449484536 115% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 6.32 8.71597938144 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.49 7.59969072165 85% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.