Old people take a while to begin using new technology, such as mobile phones. Why do you think this is happening? Suggest ways to encourage them to use mobile phones and new technology for their benefit.
Science has brought a gigantic revolution in the lifestyle of human beings with technological advancement. Presently, it is noticed that old people find it difficult to cope up with new technological gadgets in their social and official lives. Here, this essay will discuss causes and possible ways to deal with this situation.
Manifold reasons can be put down behind this phenomenon. First and foremost, conventional thinking of older people diverts their minds away from modern technology. For example, they are accustomed to old ways of dealing with different matters such as sending letters fo...
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"Multifarious remedial measures can be taken to vanish this hindrance"
"vanish" is an intransitive verb ==> No object
"disappear" has the same scenario!!
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Sentence: Moreover, illiteracy and lack of english knowledge are also resposible to discourage them towards modern apparatus.
Error: resposible Suggestion: responsible
Sentence: To recapitulate, remaining up to date is a need of hour. youngsters, company managements and manufatures of gadgets should share joint responsibility to disappear this burning issue.
Error: manufatures Suggestion: manufactures
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