Incresing number of vehicles on road is causing pollution and other traffic related problems.what are the causes behind it and suggest possible solutions?
Technology has blessed us with numerous inventions and vehicles are one of the most important invention from them. Vehicles allow us to commute to and fro in short period of time. Now the question arises that what are the reasons behind this pfroblem and how can we solve it. Lets discuss deeper about it in below paragraphs.
There are various causes behind this problem.First and foremost, lack of public transport is the major cause of this problem.For example,nowadays,in many places the transport facilities is not available and therefore the commuters are forced to buy private vehicles to mo...
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Technology has blessed us with numerous inventions and vehicles are one of the most important invention from them.
Technology has blessed us with numerous inventions, and vehicles are one of the most important inventions from them.
in short period of time.
in a short period of time.
the transport facilities is not available
the transport facilities are not available
There are multifarious solution
There are multifarious solutions
. Which leads to, the environment becomes free from contamination and reduce in traffic congestion and so on.
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but by providing these facilies which is written in the solution
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Sentence: Moreover, the another factor of increasing vehicles is status symbol.
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Sentence: Now the question arises that what are the reasons behind this pfroblem and how can we solve it.
Error: pfroblem Suggestion: problem
Sentence: Furthermore, in this fast moving world everyone needs own privacy,travel confortably and save time and hence private vehicles provide the best option to the travelers.
Error: confortably Suggestion: comfortably
Sentence: Thus, it leads to over uncrease of vehicles.
Error: uncrease Suggestion: increase
Sentence: Further emphasizing, using ecofriendly vehicles is also a lucrative panacea to reduce vehicles because these vehicles cover small space and pollution free.
Error: ecofriendly Suggestion: friendly
Sentence: To recapitulate, both have their own importance but by providing these facilies which is written in the solution could be fruitfull for reducing traffic on the roads
Error: facilies Suggestion: families
Error: fruitfull Suggestion: fruitful
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