Do you agree or disagree that celebrities are paid far too much money?
It is argued that celebrities are gaining too much money from their job as an entertainer. From my perspective, I completely agree with the statement and this essay will give reasons for my opinion as follow.
First and foremost, people who have reputations are less important than essential workers such as nurses and teachers. These employees will eventually have more stress than a film star or any well-known individuals since their jobs are considered high-risk and they could be seriously hurt or injured. However, celebrities are always receiving an excessive amount of money compared to other jobs. In addition, spending years at university to get a bachelor's degree are mandatory for doctors and engineers while celebrities are often born with their talent for singing and acting.
Another reason against the intention of extremely well-paid celebrities is that most of them waste their money on mansions, luxury cars, accessories, and private parties even though they can donate to charity organizations. Likewise, some well-known people are motivated that success can be achieved without finishing school. As an influencer, their speech may have a negative impact on teenagers.
To summarize, it is absurd to pay celebrities just for entertainment and the payment needs to be balanced with the real workload they have. However, the salary of jobs such as doctor or teacher is required to be paid higher due to their contribution to the society.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, likewise, may, so, well, while, in addition, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1227.0 1615.20841683 76% => OK
No of words: 232.0 315.596192385 74% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.28879310345 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.90276135726 4.20363070211 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8924405091 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.659482758621 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 381.6 506.74238477 75% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3699697417 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 111.545454545 106.682146367 105% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0909090909 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.63636363636 7.06120827912 94% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.142341878671 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0553725463357 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0685665684645 0.0667982634062 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0903538948701 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478634802588 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.4 12.4159519038 108% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.44 8.58950901804 110% => OK
difficult_words: 70.0 78.4519038076 89% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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