one of the best ways to solve environmental problems is to increase the cost of fuel for cars and other vehicles. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Many opinions show that raising the price of energy is one of the great ideas in decreasing environmental contamination. I disagree with that idea and other measures should be discussed.
On the one hand, people consider raising fuel prices as one of the best methods to ease pollution because the increase in the price of fuel will directly affect the necessity of gas for vehicles. When the charge of fuel goes higher, many drivers seem to have consideration and seek other alternative energy sources such as solar power. Thus, the carbon dioxide will decrease and the environment will be well-preserved. However, that is just a temporary solution, because fossil fuels are essential for almost every type of transportation. There will be a slight decline in the dependence of people on fuel, but they cannot get rid of using it. Therefore, in the long run, environmental contamination will not be solved completely.
On the other hand, in my opinion, there are other more efficient solutions for the environmental problems. Firstly, the government gives some policies to reduce pollution. For example, the authority can encourage their residents to recycle plastic rubbish, to minimize the amount of plastic litter by launching a recycling campaign so many people can take part in it. Secondly, people's awareness should be considered to be one of the main factors to deal with pollution. The government should educate young people and raise the awareness of citizens about the importance of nature. Therefore, they will acknowledge the seriousness of environmental issues, which will reduce pollution in the future.
In conclusion, for the reasons I have mentioned above, I strongly believe that raising the price of oil is not one of the best ways to reduce pollution. Governmental policies and education should be two of the most remarkable solutions for environmental matters.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, firstly, however, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, well, as for, for example, in conclusion, in fact, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1584.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.24503311258 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.01908320243 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 165.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.546357615894 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 510.3 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.2609044442 49.4020404114 75% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.0 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.875 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0625 7.06120827912 143% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.197425052075 0.244688304435 81% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641222840429 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0525186323948 0.0667982634062 79% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.12624949536 0.151304729494 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0312275721932 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.13 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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