The diagram below shows the life cycle of a salmon, from egg to adult fish.
The cycle of salmon life from egg to adult in three various ecosystems is displayed in the diagram.
Overall, life of salmon species is consisted of several cycles. Additionally, this fish is more likely to spend on their time in river and ocean than in estuary.
Initially, salmon spawns their eggs in the river, then it will be incubated before it will hatch to become juveniles. After that the emergence step, the fish rears in this freshwater area, it will travel to find a new location to inhabit after several periods. Turning to the brackish water one, it allocates the least amount of time on rearing in estuary.
Thereafter, they migrate to adapt in the ocean to discover larger rearing areas, and this fish will experience a growth of the body size as well as the maturation process in this salty water. Afterwards, when it has found a mate, the couple of salmon will go back to river to reproduce their offspring, and a new life begin again.
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- The pie charts below show how dangerous waste products are dealt with in three countries 84
- Human activity has had a negative impact on plants and animals around the world Some people think that this cannot be changed while others believe that actions can be taken to bring about the change Discuss both and give your opinion 78
- The graph shows data about the annual earnings of three bakeries in London 2000 2010 Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 78
- The graph below shows the amounts of waste produced by three companies over a period of 15 years 78
- Some people think that it is more e ective for students to study in a group while others believe that it is better for them to study alone Discuss both views and give your own opinion 78
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, then, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.0 57% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 1.00243902439 499% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 31.0 33.7804878049 92% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 790.0 965.302439024 82% => OK
No of words: 168.0 196.424390244 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70238095238 4.92477711251 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.48564472627 2.65546596893 94% => OK
Unique words: 99.0 106.607317073 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.589285714286 0.547539520022 108% => OK
syllable_count: 250.2 283.868780488 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.482926829268 414% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 22.4926829268 93% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5059926587 43.030603864 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.75 112.824112599 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 22.9334400587 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.25 5.23603664747 62% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.09268292683 171% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245273992367 0.215688989381 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.116365296662 0.103423049105 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.151714833883 0.0843802449381 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195665061561 0.15604864568 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.179298261296 0.0819641961636 219% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.2329268293 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 61.2550243902 96% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 10.3012195122 100% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.98 11.4140731707 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 40.7170731707 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.9970731707 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.