“On Balmer Island, where mopeds serve as a popular form of transportation, the population increases to 100,000 during the summer months. To reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians, the town council of Balmer Island should limit the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season. By limiting the number of rentals, the town council will attain the 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents that was achieved last year on the neighboring island of Seaville, when Seaville's town council enforced similar limits on moped rentals.”
The author of the letter has made an optimistic conclusion from disjointed and incomplete data. The reasoning given by the author to reduce the number of accidents involving mopeds and pedestrians by limiting the number of mopeds rented by the island's moped rental companies from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season leaves several questions unanswered and unless these are answered, the conclusion is not justified.
Firstly, the author has developed a correlation between the number of mopeds rented and the number of accidents; without considering any other factors. The accidents may have resulted from bad quality of roads, pedestrians carelessness or mopeds being rented by underage or irresponsible drivers. Further, if pedestrians inattentiveness is an impactful factor in accidents; on reducing number of mopeds rented, more people would prefer to walk thus increasing pedestrians and number of accidents may stay the same or even increase.
Secondly, the author’s argument relies on the assumption that moped rentals is the sole way for island habitants to use mopeds. It is highly probable that significant number of people like to buy moped instead of renting it and the accidents happening could be involving private mopeds instead of rented mopeds.
Thirdly, the author has made an indefensible comparision with the neighboring island of Seaville as seaville achieved 50 percent annual reduction in moped accidents. However, the author has provided no details regarding the population, number of mopeds rented, number of mopeds owned privately, number of accidents that happened before, how many moped rental companies are present about Seaville. Without scrutinizing how the decrease was attained by neighbouring island and if the same would hold true for Balmer island, the comparision is injustified.
In sum, it may be said that the writer has failed to make a convincing argument because of the critical flaws in reasoning. To strengthen the argument, statistics about how many private owned mopeds are there and what proportion of accidents are caused by rented mopeds has to be analyzed. Other factor like bad quality of roads or pedestrians fault in accidents should be cleared out. A more detailed study on Seaville has to be presented to make an accurate conclusion.
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Comments
e-rater score report
Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 4.0 out of 6
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 5 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 9 2
No. of Sentences: 14 15
No. of Words: 364 350
No. of Characters: 1906 1500
No. of Different Words: 180 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.368 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.236 4.6
Word Length SD: 2.827 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 168 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 107 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 84 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 58 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 26 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 10.142 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 0.571 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.401 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.586 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.094 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 4 5
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
The author of the letter has made an opt...
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Line 1, column 315, Rule ID: THE_FALL_SEASON[1]
Message: Use simply 'summer'.
Suggestion: summer
...es from 50 per day to 25 per day during the summer season leaves several questions unanswered and...
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Line 5, column 259, Rule ID: PROGRESSIVE_VERBS[1]
Message: This verb is normally not used in the progressive form. Try a simple form instead.
...ng it and the accidents happening could be involving private mopeds instead of rented mopeds...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, regarding, second, secondly, so, then, third, thirdly, thus, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 19.6327345309 81% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.9520958084 54% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 11.1786427146 107% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 13.6137724551 29% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 8.0 28.8173652695 28% => OK
Preposition: 58.0 55.5748502994 104% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 16.3942115768 49% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1954.0 2260.96107784 86% => OK
No of words: 364.0 441.139720559 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.36813186813 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.36792674256 4.56307096286 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.90686344536 2.78398813304 104% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 204.123752495 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.5 0.468620217663 107% => OK
syllable_count: 610.2 705.55239521 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 10.0 8.76447105788 114% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.70958083832 37% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.67365269461 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.22255489022 118% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 19.7664670659 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 22.8473053892 114% => OK
Sentence length SD: 64.0744146461 57.8364921388 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.571428571 119.503703932 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.0 23.324526521 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 5.70786347227 125% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.25449101796 57% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.20758483034 24% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 6.88822355289 145% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.67664670659 43% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.307874815155 0.218282227539 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.103789824778 0.0743258471296 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0725046257625 0.0701772020484 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.179796134674 0.128457276422 140% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0511659168715 0.0628817314937 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 14.3799401198 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 48.3550499002 76% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 12.197005988 120% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.16 12.5979740519 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.35 8.32208582834 112% => OK
difficult_words: 102.0 98.500998004 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.0 12.3882235529 113% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 11.1389221557 111% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 11.9071856287 126% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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