The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town
The diagram illustrates how an Australian town is collecting rainwater and further using it for drinking purposes.
Overall, the whole process is shown as to how the rainwater is treated with filters and chemicals and then used
for consumption.
Initially, the rainwater which falls on the rooftop is collected by the gutter and then runs down the pipe
at the side of the house into the drain at the bottom. Each house collects the rainwater in this manner and
rainwater is passed along the underground drains to the water filter.
In water filter rainwater is treated and all the impurities are removed. Once, it is filtered , it continues
along the pipe to a storage tank. From this point, water goes from storage tank to water treatment.At this stage
it removes all the chemicals from water and is ready for consumption.After treatment it travels along the pipe
that led to the house in the town where people can use it for daily consumption.
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- The diagram shows how rainwater is collected for the use of drinking water in an Australian town
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...with filters and chemicals and then used for consumption. Initially, the rainw...
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...y the gutter and then runs down the pipe at the side of the house into the drain ...
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...ollects the rainwater in this manner and rainwater is passed along the undergroun...
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...rities are removed. Once, it is filtered , it continues along the pipe to a stor...
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...ved. Once, it is filtered , it continues along the pipe to a storage tank. From t...
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...es from storage tank to water treatment.At this stage it removes all the chemical...
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...from water and is ready for consumption.After treatment it travels along the pipe t...
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...fter treatment it travels along the pipe that led to the house in the town where ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
then, as to
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 7.0 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 1.00243902439 100% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.15609756098 95% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 802.0 965.302439024 83% => OK
No of words: 162.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95061728395 4.92477711251 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56762134501 3.73543355544 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.73971547331 2.65546596893 103% => OK
Unique words: 89.0 106.607317073 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.549382716049 0.547539520022 100% => OK
syllable_count: 238.5 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 22.4926829268 102% => OK
Sentence length SD: 63.7847144379 43.030603864 148% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.571428571 112.824112599 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1428571429 22.9334400587 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 5.23603664747 30% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 9.0 3.83414634146 235% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 8.0 1.69756097561 471% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.09268292683 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.401874937315 0.215688989381 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.198604794546 0.103423049105 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.202321817184 0.0843802449381 240% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.168049334326 0.15604864568 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.180390616274 0.0819641961636 220% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.2329268293 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 11.4140731707 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.06136585366 102% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 40.7170731707 86% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.9970731707 102% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.0658536585 108% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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