International tourism has brought about enormous benefits to many places. At the same time, there is concern about its impact on local inhabitants and the environment. Do the disadvantages of international tourism outweigh the advantages?
International tourism has become very popular these days. This phenomenon gives countless advantages to countries across the globe. As a reverse, it also damages locals and their surrondings. In this essay, I will explain why the potential benefits of international tourism overshadow the drawback.
On the one hand, international tourism destination can offer a various benefits on host destinations. To begin with, tourism boosts the revenue of the economy as well as rise the educational standard. Many governments tha rely on tourism for a big percentage of their revenue invest a lot in the infrastructure of the country. This leads to new roads and highways, developed parks, improved public spaces, new airports, and possibly better schools and hospitals. Thus, local people experience an opportunity for economic and educational growth. Moreover, tourism creates a cultural exchange betweem tourists and local citizens. Exhibitions, conferences, and events usually attract foreigners. Organaizing authorities usually gain profits from registration fees and gift sales. Furthermore, foreign tourists bring diversity and cultural enrichment to the hosting country.
Although there is a sudden growth in the infrastructure of the country, which can be amaizing, there can be major downfalls. International tourism can lead to immense environmental damage, especially in destinations that are extremely popular and tourist-heavy. This does not usually happen because the tourists themselves directly cause the damage, but rather it happens because of the higher number of planes flying and cars criving. This peak in activity leads to higher cabon monoxide production within a country, thus negatively affecting the environment.
In conclusion, while environmental damage can occur in several places of interest, the enthralling economic support and educational benefit offered by international tourism can undermine the negative effect. Thereby, on balance, I frimly convince that the advantages of international toursim outweight its disadvantage.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 72, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'benefit'?
Suggestion: benefit
...tourism destination can offer a various benefits on host destinations. To begin with, to...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, furthermore, if, moreover, so, thus, well, while, in conclusion, as well as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 13.1623246493 30% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1762.0 1615.20841683 109% => OK
No of words: 297.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.93265993266 5.12529762239 116% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15134772569 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.22623936427 2.80592935109 115% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.632996632997 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 551.7 506.74238477 109% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6262418004 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 92.7368421053 106.682146367 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.6315789474 20.7667163134 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.31578947368 7.06120827912 75% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.20719802218 0.244688304435 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0639523172891 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0623890518021 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.139940510135 0.151304729494 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0608535459448 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 30.87 50.2224549098 61% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 16.82 12.4159519038 135% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.12 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 108.0 78.4519038076 138% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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