Some people say that art(e.g. painting, music, poetry) can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability.Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Perhaps, there is no topic of controversy in this contemporary society worth debating as the matter of innate talent. Indeed, people's views differ greatly as whether or not only gifted people can make art-In this essay, I will discuss both views from which my perspective about this matter shall be formed.
To start with, I have to concede that the belief of art for individuals with innate ability is understandable to some extent. To elucidate, those with special talents tend to perform their ideas, concepts and even outlooks into artwork more extraordinary compared to others. For the most part, gifted people find it effortless to create masterpiece. In simple words, even the basic creatures surrounding in daily lives can be their inspiration to compose or create unique work of art. For instance, Mozart, who is considered as one of the greatest composers in the world, acquires reputation for his special abilities because all of his songs are widely believed to march to a different drumbeat.
What I want to rebut, however, is that the idea of art for everyone should be thoroughly elucidated to be more plausible. In other words, art is an abstract subject, which means that it depends on not only the eyes of individuals but also its background and concept. To be clear, the value of artwork is more meaningful when it can be successfully transmissed the creator's message and the story behind. Take Selena Gomez as an instance, at the beginning, some people assumed that she couldn't sing due to the fact that she was an Disney actress; but at the present time, she is one of the best singers in this decade with a wide collection of hot hits thanks to her unprecedented effort to become better.
In summary, it is still a matter of deliberation as whether normal people can make art. Yet, I take preference in the idea of art for everyone who desires it.
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- Some people say that art e g painting music poetry can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people say that art e g painting music poetry can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
- Some people say that art e g painting music poetry can be made by everyone whereas others believe that it can only be made by those with special ability Discuss both views and give your opinion 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 159, Rule ID: WHETHER[7]
Message: Perhaps you can shorten this phrase to just 'whether'. It is correct though if you mean 'regardless of whether'.
Suggestion: whether
...Indeed, peoples views differ greatly as whether or not only gifted people can make art-In this...
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Line 3, column 364, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'creators'' or 'creator's'?
Suggestion: creators'; creator's
... it can be successfully transmissed the creators message and the story behind. Take Sele...
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Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: couldn't
...beginning, some people assumed that she couldnt sing due to the fact that she was an Di...
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Message: Use 'a' instead of 'an' if the following word doesn't start with a vowel sound, e.g. 'a sentence', 'a university'
Suggestion: a
...uldnt sing due to the fact that she was an Disney actress; but at the present time...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, look, so, still, for instance, in summary, in other words, to start with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.81677018634 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.71519698449 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.586956521739 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 491.4 506.74238477 97% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.599352683 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 119.307692308 106.682146367 112% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284072000071 0.244688304435 116% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.092171158702 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0589969846053 0.0667982634062 88% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16052657844 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192630343276 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.97 12.4159519038 88% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.04 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.