People today spend too much money on clothing to improve their appearance.
The cloth you wear define who you are. It is personal opinion that how much money should we spend on clothing. I agree with the statement that people should spend too much money on clothing to improve their appearance. In support, providing following three reasons.
First of all, our clothes define our appearance. If we buy more luxurious cloth it will improve our appearance. For example, many celebrities wears costly clothes that is why their appearance flourishes. On the other hand, for people who wear less costly clothes, their appearance looks dull and not attractive.
Secondly, more money can use to try new fashion. If we want to try new fashions we need more money and this will improve our appearance. For instance, the people who try new fashionable clothes look more attractive, So to buy clothes with different fashion we need more money.
Finally, we require different types of clothes based on function and requirement. If we buy those clothes with more money that function and requirement are going to fulfill. For example, if a manager has a client meeting and he wears a costly suit that will improve his appearance and he can perform his work boldly in front of a client. In contrast, If the manager wears less costly clothes and performed his task in the meeting he might not catch the attention of client.
In conclusion, the cost of cloth does not define appearance but if we spend more on clothing it will provide us full of fashion and variety and this will really going to improve our appearance. After discussing the above three points I agree with the statement that people today spend too much money on clothing to improve their appearance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 46, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...loth you wear define who you are. It is personal opinion that how much money should we spend on ...
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Line 2, column 49, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...all, our clothes define our appearance. If we buy more luxurious cloth it will imp...
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Line 5, column 194, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “After” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...really going to improve our appearance. After discussing the above three points I agr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, look, really, second, secondly, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, in contrast, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 15.1003584229 26% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 9.8082437276 122% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 13.8261648746 72% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 11.0286738351 82% => OK
Pronoun: 40.0 43.0788530466 93% => OK
Preposition: 29.0 52.1666666667 56% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 18.0 8.0752688172 223% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1391.0 1977.66487455 70% => OK
No of words: 287.0 407.700716846 70% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.84668989547 4.8611393121 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.48103885553 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.57472193094 2.67179642975 96% => OK
Unique words: 127.0 212.727598566 60% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.442508710801 0.524837075471 84% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 416.7 618.680645161 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.51630824373 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.59856630824 52% => OK
Article: 3.0 3.08781362007 97% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 3.51792114695 171% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 20.6003584229 83% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 20.1344086022 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.7862850026 48.9658058833 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.8235294118 100.406767564 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.6045352989 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64705882353 5.45110844103 159% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.5376344086 54% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 11.8709677419 76% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.88709677419 102% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.415667242542 0.236089414692 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.150252910501 0.076458572812 197% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.150269038994 0.0737576698707 204% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.271942112548 0.150856017488 180% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.147807372498 0.0645574589148 229% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 11.7677419355 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 58.1214874552 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 10.9000537634 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.69 8.01818996416 83% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 86.8835125448 47% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 4.5 10.002688172 45% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.0537634409 84% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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We are expecting: No. of Words: 350 while No. of Different Words: 200
Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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