Many people dream of owning their own business but are afraid of the risks, instead of
starting a new business, however, one can buy a franchise. A franchise is a license
issued by a large, usually well-known, company to a small business owner. Under the
license, the owner acquires the right to use the company's brand name and agrees to sell
its products. In return, the franchising company receives a percent of the sales.
A franchise businesses problem for first-time business owners is finding reliable suppliers of the goods
and services they need: equipment, raw materials, maintenance, etc. It is easy to choose
the wrong supplier, and doing so can be costly. Buying a franchise eliminates much of
this problem. Most franchising companies have already found reliable suppliers, and
franchise contracts typically specify which suppliers are to be used. is challenged protects
franchise owners from the risk of serious losses.
Another advantage of a franchise is that it can save a new business a lot of money on
advertising. Advertising one's product to potential customers is a crucial factor in a
business's success. A franchise owner, however, sells an already the and recognized
brand and also gets the benefit of sophisticated and expensive advertising paid by the
parent company.
Finally, a franchise offers more security than starting an independent (non-franchise)
business. The failure rate for starting independent businesses is very high during the
first few years; the failure rate for starting franchises is much lower. Finding one's own
way in today's competitive business environment is difficult, and buying a franchise
allows an inexperienced business owner to use a proven business model.
The passage tells about the importance of buying a franchise rather than starting a new business. However, the lecturer does not agree with the points made in the passage and provides her contrary points as follows.
To begin with, the professor does not agree with the statement that a franchise eliminates a finding of goods and suppliers for a business. In contrast, she states that the goods provided by a franchise are more expensive than goods available in the market. The franchise already boosted their product prices high.
Secondly, the teacher state that a franchise took 6% of the total profit from the franchise owner in return they do advertise not specifically for their businesses but for their franchise name which results in less advertising of the specific franchise owner business. Additionally, if the business owner does his own business advertising he can get it done at less price with greater output.
Finally, the text claims that franchise provides security for a new business involving less risk. On the other hand, the professor contradicts this statement saying that if any new businessman wants to start a new business he should buy an already developed business than any franchise because that business is already popular in that specific area and there is a double chance that the business is going to succeed than any franchise.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ady boosted their product prices high. Secondly, the teacher state that a franc...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...one at less price with greater output. Finally, the text claims that franchise ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, however, if, second, secondly, so, in contrast, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 10.4613686534 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 5.04856512141 40% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 7.30242825607 55% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 12.0772626932 75% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 22.412803532 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 30.3222958057 73% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 5.01324503311 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1142.0 1373.03311258 83% => OK
No of words: 224.0 270.72406181 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.09821428571 5.08290768461 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.86867284054 4.04702891845 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6949499257 2.5805825403 104% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 145.348785872 84% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.544642857143 0.540411800872 101% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 419.366225166 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.55342163355 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 3.25607064018 31% => OK
Article: 7.0 8.23620309051 85% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.25165562914 80% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.51434878587 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 2.5761589404 116% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 13.0662251656 69% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 21.2450331126 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.8777483072 49.2860985944 174% => OK
Chars per sentence: 126.888888889 110.228320801 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8888888889 21.698381199 115% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.4444444444 7.06452816374 148% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.09492273731 98% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 4.19205298013 48% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 4.33554083885 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 4.45695364238 45% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.27373068433 23% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.308732308133 0.272083759551 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.125433702433 0.0996497079465 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0785691575033 0.0662205650399 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.174065233594 0.162205337803 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0917862011763 0.0443174109184 207% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.0 13.3589403974 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 53.8541721854 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 5.55761589404 158% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.0289183223 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.6 12.2367328918 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.42419426049 96% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 63.6247240618 72% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 10.7273730684 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.498013245 110% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.2008830022 116% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 60.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 18.0 Out of 30
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