With the development of the media online, there is no future for the radio. To what extent do you agree?
Over the past decade, the use of technology has a growing influence in the modern world, which could be even seen replace its previous generations. While some people believe that the popularity of social media can leak to the death of radio, I would argue the opposite. To prove this, both sides of the argument will be discussed.
On one hand, convenience is one of the most persuasive reason for the rise of internet news. Viewers can watch, see, listen, read and even choose the topic they want to find out. For example: with a small phone the reader can search for all the information in all kind of languages and time. Furthermore,
Although radioes aren’t as advantageous as modern devides, however, they still have their own strengths. Firstly, the information on the radio is truthful. This is because these information is posted by high reputation broadcasters and always be monitored by the government. Secondly, wireless telegraphy doesn’t cause any distractions while using because the users just need to sit down and listen. The reason is that radioes don’t have advertisements or any other functions which means the listeners can focus one what they heard fully. Thirdly, radioes have the own time table which prevent the addiction from using to much. For instance, the football news only display from 7 PM until 9 PM so the listeners only have 2 hours for that news.
In conclusion, I have discussed both sides of the argument and given my opinions. Although the social media may be convenient, I still belive it can’t replace the radio because the useful information and the safety of users.
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... the radio is truthful. This is because these information is posted by high reputation broadcaste...
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... which prevent the addiction from using to much. For instance, the football news o...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, furthermore, however, may, second, secondly, so, still, third, thirdly, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95955882353 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68825932783 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.610294117647 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5462587547 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.9333333333 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1333333333 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.6 7.06120827912 136% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.121335527313 0.244688304435 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0395150796309 0.084324248473 47% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0363262030104 0.0667982634062 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0700129909867 0.151304729494 46% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0181574773883 0.056905535591 32% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.24 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 78.4519038076 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.