Some people think that hosting an international sports event is good for the country, while some people think it is bad. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
There is an increasingly growing popular idea that it is a global sports occurrence that benefits a region, while others claim that it is not worth holding such significant event in a country. Both sides have, of course, their merits but I firmly belive that the first view is more valid and my reasons for saying so are presented below.
First and foremost, it is notable that having hosted an international occurrence, the country may become a household name, more renowned than ever by appearing on mass media and social network, especially on some top-notch journalism brands, such as The New York Times and The Guardians, which coincidentally promotes the country’s images. Only when this massive event is occured are a number of products endorsed, which is considered as a jump in the economy when they soon become a phenomenon, accumulating profits and attracting investors. The Olympics taken place in Japan could be an obvious example due to its success in 2020, drawing every nation’s attention.
On the other hand, there is no denying that so extravagant is the event that the host is burdened with enormous debts. Not only does financial issue naturally occur, but it is the antisocial behaviour that are also triggered during this festive occassion because some criminals take advantages of the sports event to organize gambling and pickpocketing activities in a large scale. To shed light on this problem, only after holdingThe Olympics did Egypt has to spend billions and even have a huge debt preparing it due to their belief in some profits this international sports event would bring. However, it can still be argued that the problems relating to money can be dealt with by the continental sponsorships and cooperations.
In conclusion, to a certain extend, it is true that hosting a multinational occassion triggers social and financial issues, in my perspective, the merits still have a great impact on economy, which signifies the other side.
- Technology has brought so many changes that modern lifestyles are completely different from the way people lived in the past Do you think the positive effects of technology outweigh its disadvantages 56
- It is a natural process for animal species to become extinct E g Dinosaurs dodos There is no reason why people should try to prevent this from happening Do you agree or disagree 89
- The diagram below shows the different stages in the manufacturing and use of steel 100
- Today the high sales of popular consumer goods reflect the power of advertising and not the real needs of the society in which they are sold To what extend do you agree or disagree 89
- It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction To what extent do you agree or disagree with this opinion What sort of punishment should parents and t 64
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 67, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...rowing popular idea that it is a global sports occurrence that benefits a region, whil...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 302, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...e some criminals take advantages of the sports event to organize gambling and pickpock...
^^^^^^
Line 5, column 444, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... problem, only after holdingThe Olympics did Egypt has to spend billions and even...
^^
Line 5, column 572, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...lief in some profits this international sports event would bring. However, it can stil...
^^^^^^
Line 7, column 29, Rule ID: SOME_EXTEND[1]
Message: Did you mean 'extent' ("extent" is a noun, "extend" is a verb)?
Suggestion: extent
...rations. In conclusion, to a certain extend, it is true that hosting a multinationa...
^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, incidentally, may, so, still, while, as to, in conclusion, of course, such as, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 15.0 7.30460921844 205% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1656.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.12693498452 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8733552485 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 197.0 176.041082164 112% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.609907120743 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 514.8 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 32.0 20.2975951904 158% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.3584207166 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 165.6 106.682146367 155% => OK
Words per sentence: 32.3 20.7667163134 156% => OK
Discourse Markers: 13.9 7.06120827912 197% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.171499686178 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586356618253 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0385694973114 0.0667982634062 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0901630505425 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0407815371114 0.056905535591 72% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.9 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.0 50.2224549098 78% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.8 11.3001002004 140% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.07 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.16 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 9.78957915832 184% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.8 10.1190380762 146% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
---------------------
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
---------------------
Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.