Some people support generous benefits for workers such as high wages, long-term pensions, and comprehensive medical coverage. Others believe that such benefits are impractical. Discuss both sides and give your opinion.
There is no doubt that giving workers generous terms of employment is a controversial issue in today’s global economy. This writer is of the opinion that, in the long term it is wise to provide working people with the means to live productive and meaningful lives.
There is a widespread belief that employment plans should be as worker-friendly as possible. Due to being well-paid and having strong benefits, workers can support their families through providing education, health care, and a high standard of living. In addition, employees who are well taken care of will be loyal to their compa...
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- Some people support generous benefits for workers such as high wages, long-term pensions, and comprehensive medical coverage. Others believe that such benefits are impractical. Discuss both sides and give your opinion. 90
- Worker in low-wage industries should be provided with a guaranteed minimum income and benefits to ensure that they can provide for themselves and their families.Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons for your opinion. 80
- The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today is by reducing the need for people to travel from home for work, study or shopping.To what extent do you agree or disagree? 68
- As languages such as English Spanish and Mandarin become more widely spoken there is a fear that many minority languages may die out Some countries have taken steps to protect minority languages What is your view of this practice 74
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