Although many people think that the luxuries and conveniences of contemporary life are entirely harmless, in fact, they actually prevent people from developing into truly strong and independent individuals.
Are luxuries of contemporary life a hurdle preventing us from becoming strong and independent individuals? I concede that sometimes the conveniences today may make us indolent and sluggish however, in a more general sense the luxuries helps us automate perfunctory tasks and reach our true potential.
Right from waking up, we use refrigerator that curbs the need to go grocery shopping everyday, dishwasher that saves us time, public transportation or car that enables us to reach work early, computers to assist us, phones to connect us and the one thing common between all of them is that they save us time helping us focus on more valuable tasks. Today, farming is made easier with various tools to assist and reduce workload.
Previously in various industrial jobs, humans had to perform life-threatening tasks which are now being automated by machinery. The invention of airplanes and internet has helped millions of people to move countries and relocate where they can study and work in the field they like helping them become independent individuals.
For people that cannot learn skills like dancing, singing, painting due to financial reasons, internet has provided them with abundant opportunities to learn any skill for free. Many people have achieved recognition for their work through internet.
However, along with plenty opportunuties there are some harms of such conveniences. People are becoming more anxious and depressed through social media, lazy due to televisions and cellphones. The luxuries have made us more and more dependent on it, a day without electricity or machines cannot even be imagined.
In sum, the luxuries and conveniences may sometimes hinder our path in becoming strong and independent individuals but the benefits outweighs it helping us focus on more significant tasks.
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| 2021-12-22 | khushishah | 50 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 86, Rule ID: EVERYDAY_EVERY_DAY[3]
Message: 'Everyday' is an adjective. Did you mean 'every day'?
Suggestion: every day
...t curbs the need to go grocery shopping everyday, dishwasher that saves us time, public ...
^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 19.5258426966 41% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 12.4196629213 48% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 11.3162921348 71% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 58.6224719101 61% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 12.9106741573 23% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 2235.4752809 69% => OK
No of words: 286.0 442.535393258 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3986013986 5.05705443957 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.55969084622 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.91871558733 2.79657885939 104% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 215.323595506 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.618881118881 0.4932671777 125% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 704.065955056 68% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59117977528 107% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 6.24550561798 32% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 3.10617977528 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 20.2370786517 59% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 23.0359550562 100% => OK
Sentence length SD: 74.5255362648 60.3974514979 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 128.666666667 118.986275619 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.8333333333 23.4991977007 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 5.21951772744 40% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.97078651685 121% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 7.80617977528 13% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.83258426966 62% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176590425567 0.243740707755 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0764980453264 0.0831039109588 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0900735396004 0.0758088955206 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0974159773991 0.150359130593 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0548330127322 0.0667264976115 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.9 14.1392134831 112% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 39.67 48.8420337079 81% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 12.1743820225 110% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.34 12.1639044944 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.38706741573 108% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 100.480337079 77% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 20.0 11.8971910112 168% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 11.2143820225 100% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.