Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the
world, with serious results for the environment. What do you think can be
done to solve this problem?
Human activities have been destroying the environment in the modern world, and one of the most serious problems affecting the environment is deforestation. In my opinion, there are two approaches that can be taken to reduce the number of illegal loggers: strengthen forest protection posts around the forest and increase people's knowledge about environmental protection.
To begin with, setting up more security posts around forests or hills can help to reduce a significant amount of loggers' access to the forest. On the other hand, it is important to check goods on trucks or containers that travel along with the city or town or from province to province, especially in forested areas, in order to detect and intercept illegal wood trade, which will lead to inhibit logging.
Second, it is critical to raise public awareness about the importance of protecting the natural environment, particularly forests. This is the first and most important step. Schools could include lessons about how important the forest is for the survival of all creatures on Earth. We could also teach students how to protect the forest, such as planting trees, logging legally, and reporting if they see anyone engaging in illegal logging. Furthermore, schools should organize afforestation campaigns on a regular basis to raise student awareness of the importance of forests. Parents can also be good teachers by instilling in their children a love of Mother Nature.
It is impossible to deny that deforestation is one of the most pressing issues that must be addressed in today's world. Protecting the forest is not only the responsibility of a country or a single person, but of the entire world, and everyone is accountable for it. Protecting the environment in general, and forests in particular, will be an ongoing issue that will have a direct impact on our future generations, so it should be a top priority in every country.
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- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment What do you think can be done to solve this problem 89
- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment What do you think can be done to solve this problem 89
- Deforestation caused by human activity is happening in many parts of the world with serious results for the environment What do you think can be done to solve this problem 73
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, second, so, still, then, in general, in particular, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1610.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 312.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 5.16025641026 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20279927342 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92610476335 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.596153846154 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 0.809619238477 618% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.7336186679 49.4020404114 109% => OK
Chars per sentence: 123.846153846 106.682146367 116% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.0 20.7667163134 116% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0 7.06120827912 156% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.148429584856 0.244688304435 61% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0545906215092 0.084324248473 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0567025157471 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0945644590672 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0543995765123 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.94 12.4159519038 104% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.33 8.58950901804 109% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.