The diagram illustrates how carbonated water is made in a processing factory.
Overall, there are a total of five main steps in the whole process of manufacturing carbonated water, beginning with the cleaning water and ending with packaging.
Processing raw water is the first step and the most complicated step. First of all, the initial water is cleaned with a filter. Moving to a water softener, filtered water is softened with chemicals before being pumped to an electric heating. That is the second step, in which the cooling water occurs. Finally, carbon dioxide is added to dissolve in heated water.
In the third step, the carbonated water is transferred to a mixing tank in order to combine with colouring, syrup and flavour. Consequently, the water is filtered the second time prior to being poured into bottles and cans. In the step five, the final products are packaged and delivered to the consumers
- The diagram gives information about the process of making carbonated drinks Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant 61
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'totals'?
Suggestion: totals
...ocessing factory. Overall, there are a total of five main steps in the whole process...
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ater. In the third step, the carbonated water is transferred to a mixing tank in...
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Line 4, column 305, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... packaged and delivered to the consumers
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, finally, first, second, so, third, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 7.0 171% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 24.0 33.7804878049 71% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.97073170732 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 766.0 965.302439024 79% => OK
No of words: 152.0 196.424390244 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03947368421 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.51124308557 3.73543355544 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67293166989 2.65546596893 101% => OK
Unique words: 87.0 106.607317073 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.572368421053 0.547539520022 105% => OK
syllable_count: 239.4 283.868780488 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.33902439024 115% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 8.94146341463 112% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 22.4926829268 67% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 32.7397312145 43.030603864 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.6 112.824112599 68% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2 22.9334400587 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.1 5.23603664747 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 0.0 3.70975609756 0% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0609919282934 0.215688989381 28% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0316278230178 0.103423049105 31% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0412775944485 0.0843802449381 49% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0625083477126 0.15604864568 40% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0455726664182 0.0819641961636 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.2329268293 75% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 61.2550243902 92% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 10.3012195122 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.36 11.4140731707 100% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 47.0 40.7170731707 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 11.4329268293 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.9970731707 73% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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