A friend you made while you were studying abroad would like to spend a semester studying in your country.
He/she has written to ask for your advice.Write a letter to this friend.
In your letter
•describe why you think he/she will enjoy it
•explain why you recommend studying at your university
•give some advice about how to apply
Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear
Dear Alex,
Thanks for your letter! I'm so excited that you will be travelling to India for M.Arch course. I would be more than happy to help!
For a start, you would love this country especially Mumbai because of its hustle and bustle. Life is fast paced here and there is no free time. Also, there are many sightseeing places to visit and I know that you would enjoy exploring the city.
Actually, Mumbai University is one of the leading institutes for Management course. I've seen all my seniors excel in their careers. What's more is that the lecturers here have a fun way of teaching. It's more practical than theory. You can give this college a shot.
To be honest, applying here is not an easy task. I would suggest that you update your application and try to book a slot for an interview. I can recommend your name as this will add up extra points to your application. I'm sure if you start working right now, getting in will be a piece of cake for you.
Hoping to see you soon!
Lots of love,
John
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... all my seniors excel in their careers. Whats more is that the lecturers here have a ...
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...dd up extra points to your application. Im sure if you start working right now, ge...
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Suggestion:
... to see you soon! Lots of love, John
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, also, if, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 3.03092783505 132% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 32.9175257732 82% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 841.0 937.175257732 90% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.49732620321 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.29985073252 2.54303337028 90% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.647058823529 0.622605031667 104% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 16.3608247423 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.8638606042 44.8134815571 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 60.0714285714 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.3571428571 16.8248392259 79% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.57142857143 4.34317383033 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.94845360825 101% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.293944120903 0.216113520407 136% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0905570374654 0.0766984524023 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0798163918696 0.0603063233224 132% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164993428135 0.12726935374 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0636647717456 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 6.4 8.37731958763 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 75.2 70.7449484536 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.0 7.45979381443 80% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.32 7.59969072165 96% => OK
difficult_words: 36.0 41.2886597938 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.2 8.54432989691 84% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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