The bar charts illustrate the average house expenses in England and its capital city – London, and to present the comparison regarding the average house prices between distinct areas of England within the year 2013.
The given diagrams show the figures about average house cost in England and London, as well as comparing the prices between six different ares of England.
Overall, the money had to be paid for a house in London was always higher, compared to the coutry. Another, the housing payment of that city costed the most while the lowest one could be found in North East.
In 1995, the average expenditure of a house in London was 200000 pounds, considerably more than England’s price. Over a eight-year period, London’s house value increased enormously, then reached to more than 400000 pounds, more than twice country’s average.
Reguarding the costliness, North East and Midlands were two places having striking difference with four other areas, just wasted arround 100.000 to 150.000 pounds while the citizens in London had to spend 400.000 pounds for housing. At the middle of list were South East, South West and North West with approximate 310.000p, 260.000p and 200.000p respectively.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 85, Rule ID: IT_VBZ[1]
Message: Did you mean 'supports'?
Suggestion: supports
... the university’s services including IT support offerd and opening hours between of ful...
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Line 2, column 84, Rule ID: A_PLURAL[2]
Message: Don't use indefinite articles with plural words. Did you mean 'feedback'?
Suggestion: feedback
... is that there were a numerous positive feedbacks for opening hours, much more than the I...
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Line 2, column 128, Rule ID: DT_PRP[1]
Message: Possible typo. Did you mean 'the' or 'IT'?
Suggestion: the; IT
...backs for opening hours, much more than the IT services. Besides, full-time students t...
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Line 4, column 147, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...-happy feedbacks respectively, 1% and 5% not-at-all though as well. Finally, the ...
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Line 4, column 323, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...o much more than 12% of the counterparts .
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, look, so, third, well, while, as regards, in contrast, in general, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 6.0 5.60731707317 107% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 33.7804878049 83% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.97073170732 50% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 971.0 965.302439024 101% => OK
No of words: 179.0 196.424390244 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42458100559 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86642440837 2.65546596893 108% => OK
Unique words: 116.0 106.607317073 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.648044692737 0.547539520022 118% => OK
syllable_count: 280.8 283.868780488 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 8.94146341463 89% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.4926829268 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.712949618 43.030603864 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 121.375 112.824112599 108% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.375 22.9334400587 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.25 5.23603664747 234% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.09268292683 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.380061031328 0.215688989381 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.175782461914 0.103423049105 170% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.144414152699 0.0843802449381 171% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.257913645878 0.15604864568 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.131657714155 0.0819641961636 161% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.2329268293 116% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 61.2550243902 80% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.3012195122 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.45 11.4140731707 127% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 46.0 40.7170731707 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.9970731707 98% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 11.0658536585 99% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.