Some say that the internet is making the world smaller by bringing people together. To what extent do to you agree that the internet is making it easier for people to communicate with one another?
It is the internet the one making the world smaller by bringing people together and helping humanity to communicate easier. I agree completely with this idea because the internet gives us the creativity to devise a modern way of communication.
The main reason for this is that the internet is eliminating all the borders between countries virtually. Now we can build connections to people from all over the world without even having to meet them physically. Just this year, Facebook decided to change their company name with Metaverse, and immediately launched a virtual world that requires only a small device to make the entrance. Let say that I live in Indonesia, thanks to the internet and metaverse, I get to meet clients from India to conduct business without the need to leave my house. That is why the internet is the most fascinating new world that needs to be explored, yet not many people can really understand the way the internet works.
As we all know that the technology of the internet first appeared in the 90s and people are trying so hard to comprehend the innovations that came with it. There are several upgrades to the daily-life system that has been used including computerizing all the archives in offices for instance. Today even in the smaller environment, we can find some home appliances that are 'smart' and equipped with internet-based hardware with all of the algorithms that devise a machine learning technology that can recognize our habits and what we need on a daily basis, the machine learns, sometimes even surpass the way we human think.
To conclude this, though I strongly agree about the idea of the internet is making life easier, I think that we need to keep it open to the options of advancement in terms of technologies in the future because something big is coming and it is near.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 428, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ipped with internet-based hardware with all of the algorithms that devise a machine learni...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, really, so, for instance, i think
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 24.0651302605 150% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1521.0 1615.20841683 94% => OK
No of words: 314.0 315.596192385 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.84394904459 5.12529762239 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20951839842 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72470981423 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 174.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554140127389 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 20.2975951904 138% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 64.6263257773 49.4020404114 131% => OK
Chars per sentence: 138.272727273 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.5454545455 20.7667163134 137% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 7.06120827912 57% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.354917163545 0.244688304435 145% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.141271218922 0.084324248473 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.136942307031 0.0667982634062 205% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.230053591363 0.151304729494 152% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.125551934809 0.056905535591 221% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.52 50.2224549098 103% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.09 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 65.0 78.4519038076 83% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.2 10.1190380762 130% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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